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A Storm's Lullaby Page 113

The Little Lamb story concluded. 

Only few pages left until end of Book 3 & things will take a turn for the worse .

A Storm's Lullaby Page 113

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Thanks! May get useful in the future.

Nice story analog.

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

the rules of the story are unforgiving

"things will take a turn for the worse." Oh no...

keroko

I see what you mean. Original dialogue was clearer - Lullaby tells her version of the story. I will rewrite it.

It seems like a good deal of time passes between panels 3 and 4. That, or I am misunderstanding the mood or something. Lullaby goes from asking how the story ends, to... it seems she is telling either how she thinks the story should go, or she is discussing with Tempest after having heard the rest of it.


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