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Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)

35 captioned pages, 33 raw images.

Aether confesses her love to Shenhe, she doesn't know how to deal with it very well and has never really felt attracted to anyone. Even so, seeing him as a nice guy, she accepts his feelings.

Days later, she goes to Master Zhang (Liyue's blacksmith) to get a polearm. There she meets Zhang's new apprentice, a strong black man who came from Natlan, and then she feels something in her body that she has never felt before.

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Sorry for the slight delay. I felt like this doujinshi was a bit more cruel to the cuck than the others. I think it happened because I tried to explore Shenhe's personality, and her having an evil nature didn't help much.

I hope you like it. You can comment what you think. I myself have my criticisms, but they say authors can be their own biggest critics.

The next doujinshi will be the other route of Artoria's doujinshi. Since I changed my style, I think it's better to finish this as soon as possible.

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Comments

Peak

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Yes, other creators do worse. I guess I was overthinking it. I think in all my doujinshis the guy who steals the girl is likable. I prefer it that way, and it's better if the person wants to self-insert as him. I try to build the story in a way that you can self-insert as whoever you want, even the girl. I don't know if I should give spoilers about what's going to happen to Xianyun. But if this continues the next chapter will be from her point of view. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment.

Mogu

This was fantastic! Way better than I expected for sure! And I can understand why you’d think she was extra cruel but honestly I don’t think it was that bad. Like I’ve seen other creators do ntr that is wayyy more cruel than this was. If anything she was just direct but not cruel. She even broke up with him at the end so that drops it down even more by not torturing him. Also you didn’t make Khauzu a douche type of guy so your writing of him made him likeable, so I think that also take away from the cruelness. All in all I think you did great, the interactions between Shenhe and Khauzu were good, the positions were amazing, and you were also able to make his hair consistent! Thank you! Great job overall! Lastly, you do too god of a job with those cliffhangers lol. Now I’d be interested in seeing how Xianyu would react to the whole situation😭.

AJ


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