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I Can Fix Her (Doujinshi)

Seeking revenge, Jeanne burns everything in her way. Fujimaru and Mash are too busy to help with that singularity. So a interdimensional hero, Black Bald Knight, is called in to fix the problem.

30 captioned pages, 28 raw images.

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Done, I hope it turned out good. If there is any strange dialogue, I can fix it later.

If you guys like this theme, I can make sequels with others hot evil women. You can also suggest one if you have someone in mind, it doesn't have to be limited to Fate girls.

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Comments

That’s fair. To simplify their interactions, she’s a lovesick girl who is very delusional about how she sees him, and he’s a stoic vampire samurai who tries to be rational with her. They have a pretty cute dynamic so it would be cool to see what you could make with them. But yeah you might have to look up some things about them to see how to write them better. *If you would even write something with them* I also would try to recommend more evil girls but I’m blanking rn.

Aj

Ahh okay, that’s what I figured why it was said. Thanks for the explaining!

Aj

I'll remember the suggestions, I just don't know much about guilty gear, so it would be difficult to write something with them.

Mogu

the gorrilla thing was because in some animes/mangas some people call big, manly, an sometimes dumb, men gorrillas. If it bothers more people I can make a version without it.

Mogu

Also a suggestion for another character for this theme could be Azula from Avatar. I would like to see an Elphelt Valentine x Nagoriyuki doujin but that wouldn’t really be in this theme, it would be more romantic than anything.

Aj

This is excellent! Great job Mogu! I do like the dialogue a lot and think you do a great job, the only thing I would say is that I’m not really into her calling him a gorilla at times. For me that’s kind of a turn off but I can’t speak for others.

Aj


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