Very Rough Preview (Thoughts?)

As you can see, this is a VERY rough preview of the first half (ish) of The Inventing Room Remake, and I wanna hear what you have to say about it!

Before that though, there are a few things to say:

1. The comic is subject to change, whether it is the layout, style, panels, etc. None of the characters except for the berry girls and Wonka are confirmed to be featured in the final product. They are just placement holders that are there in order for me to see what the overall visual will be like.

2. I am still working on the script/speech, but since this is usually one of the last things I add, you won't likely see it until the final release.

3. To go along with the comic, I'm also working on a prologue that introduces the characters and a short bit of world building so that you can understand the comic a bit better. This will be included with the final comic remake.

4. I'm starting to feel a bit of burnout again from this series and I have ignored it for too long now. I've decided to split my time between this remake and a few other sequences I have been working on (stay tuned over the next few days).

5. I want to know what your thoughts are based on what you see. Whether your thoughts are on the berry transformation, layout, characters, speech, or anything else, I want to hear it! I want this to be the best sequence I've ever made, and so any help/feedback/praise/whatever would be vert beneficial, so don't hold back (but still be nice. It's constructive criticism :))

I cannot wait for this remake to be released, as I know many of you are very excited to see it (and it's inevitable alternate gallery) and I am just as excited to see it in all it's final glory too.

The images have a heavy watermark on them to make sure that people don't take the images as themselves.