Witchy Ex-Girlfriend - Part 4
Added 2022-08-15 03:01:36 +0000 UTCMature Content - 18+ Only
This chapter takes place months after Chapter 3 and nearly concludes the story of Cori and Dave as they struggle with a curse put upon him by his powerful ex-girlfriend.
Note: There will be a minor "years later" epilogue on the way that's just a quick peek at the future of the world I'm creating here, that I will likely use in other stories down the road.
I hope you enjoy it. It's likely the last full comic I'm going to release for a while, as trying to complete these enormous projects have taken a bit of a toll on me. So expect smaller updates for the immediate future.
You can read the full thing here or by downloading the attached PDF files.
Cheers!
- Kara
Comments
Still waiting on part 5
lilsnook 230
2023-02-01 23:15:28 +0000 UTCI'm in the middle of reading Part 4. I love this story. It's not only sexy, but really sweet as well.
TheRollingWrath888
2022-10-07 09:15:06 +0000 UTCThat's a sensible request. I'm mostly making stories, but sex is certainly a part of it. I just have no real way to gauge the self satisfaction factor of these things. I'll try to keep that in mind going forward. That or release a bonus extended sexual bit or something. The downside of not having a lower head to test run these things with. Lol
KaraComet
2022-08-17 12:25:45 +0000 UTCSo, first I want to say that this was really hot and I appreciated seeing all that nice milky goodness. Your models are all incredibly well done! One nagging issue that I've noticed in more than a few works of yours is that you have the tendency to abruptly end the sexy-times with a sudden infusion of PLOT. While not the be-all-end-all, I would encourage you to let sex scenes have time to come to a full and complete stop, with space to breathe a bit before having a wizard pop in or the like. It definitely makes sense in context to what the characters were feeling, but it wasn't the most conducive to the primary purpose of erotic work. My lower head would thank you, at least!
Rosenheim
2022-08-17 06:44:24 +0000 UTCI can go with that. I was thinking in that it would be tales of other people that had meet those group of people and the messes made
JEFFREY McMILLAN
2022-08-15 21:54:27 +0000 UTCI think I want it to be its own thing. I definitely want to do more with the A.R.A., the detectives, and Pauline. But I feel that after a small glimpse into the future of Dave and Cori, that this is an appropriate end to their own story. Mostly because (spoilers), it would likely get dull and monotonous as time went on. You'd eventually just see two people dating and raising a few kids. I could probably explore that more, except anything that deals with credit card processors generally doesn't like children being in adult material, even if they're not a part of anything in the adult theme.
KaraComet
2022-08-15 18:07:29 +0000 UTCwow! when you said it was the end, now I want more it can't end like this. is this going to be part of a multiverse
JEFFREY McMILLAN
2022-08-15 17:44:05 +0000 UTCGreat work! Very keen to see how Cori and Dave are faring years down the line!
Fox Face
2022-08-15 03:49:04 +0000 UTC
