Hot Shit High Ch.2, Pg 47
Added 2019-12-18 00:21:57 +0000 UTCNow to see if my experiment works. If it does, you should be able to intuitively read this page in a zig-zag fashion, along the lines of the tilted gutters. To be honest, there were probably other, more effective ways to approach this sequence, but this is the idea that stood out in my mind the most. I opted here for more simplistic depictions, and hopefully that helps. The next page should be interesting to say the least.
Comments
getting closer...
Erotibot
2019-12-21 00:24:51 +0000 UTCGotta love it when you type out a full reply and Patreon decides to log you out when you hit send. Anyways, wanted to say thanks for the very astute observations, Tahldon, you never fail to impress.
Erotibot
2019-12-21 00:24:34 +0000 UTChahaha, this one is excellent :D
DIO
2019-12-18 09:13:12 +0000 UTCThe page reads well to start with, but the panels panning out in the direction Marvin teleports definitely helps too! And this makes me all the more curious as to what will happen with Sharlene.
TimParaxade
2019-12-18 05:03:49 +0000 UTCWonder what will happen to Sharlene when he's done with these two...
Stone Quillian III
2019-12-18 04:36:42 +0000 UTCThe fucks are strong with this one
Rodger L.
2019-12-18 00:46:53 +0000 UTCBoy, Marvin is displaying some techniques out of this world. What a beast! Also I think that this read -quite- well, actually. The gutters help to keep the attention kind of rolling back and forth between the action, but you've also made the main point of the scene (Marvin's teleporting back and forth) the primary focus, but, as with all of your comics pages, you kept the girls on their respective portions of the screen and used Billy's whirling body language to supplement the reader's eye, there's no way we can bounce out of the frame if Billy (complete with a black border) is there to stop us from veering off of the action. Great work as usual, man. I could seriously say that this page is one of the best, but I've been saying that for 47 pages!
Tahldon
2019-12-18 00:32:34 +0000 UTCThat works *really* well. Very easy to follow the flow of the action and Billy's dialogue.
ArdenW
2019-12-18 00:31:31 +0000 UTC
