The Harlot of St. Hildegarde
Added 2016-05-01 04:12:14 +0000 UTCComic practice round 2! It's a short about a Catholic school girl who can't stop fucking! I think it's becoming a problem!
This time I tried playing with a narrative writing style. I also learned how important it is to make time for proper planning beforehand... since I'm not sure the page flow works exactly the way I intended it to. Maybe I should try writing panel descriptions along with my dialog next time... I also need to practice managing my blacks a little better to give the pages more punch. So much to learn! Well anyways I hope you enjoy it, and I'm going to continue getting better at this!
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Comments
I died laughing, great punch line!
Tran5it
2016-05-04 16:52:41 +0000 UTCThank-you!
Erotibot
2016-05-03 04:11:29 +0000 UTCNice short story, well done :D
Angel Ortuño
2016-05-02 23:12:48 +0000 UTCHaha yea XD... it's the hypocrisy that makes it so indulgent!
Erotibot
2016-05-02 16:34:40 +0000 UTCThanks! I wanna improve more :> I want them to be even better.
Erotibot
2016-05-02 16:33:48 +0000 UTCSo good. Can't wait to see more, no matter the theme. But I personally love religious-themed porn. It's blasphemous!
Ben Marxx
2016-05-02 07:33:07 +0000 UTCYou got some serious skills, that's awesome! Practice makes everything perfect but you're already far on that road ;D
Luckybun
2016-05-02 05:12:56 +0000 UTCI love "maybes". They're so full of optimism. =)
Tracy Scops
2016-05-01 19:10:04 +0000 UTCHmmm, I never intended to resume it, as it was just for practice, and meant to end on a cliffhanger of sorts... but maybe...
Erotibot
2016-05-01 17:50:10 +0000 UTCThanks Kevin!
Erotibot
2016-05-01 17:49:24 +0000 UTCSooner or later it cums down to fate...
2016-05-01 15:30:33 +0000 UTCOh yeah, that's the real reason I became a patron of yours: COMICS! Do you intend on resuming that first tryout from last month? I sure vote for so, if it makes any difference. =)
Tracy Scops
2016-05-01 12:55:52 +0000 UTC
