Your feedback is appreciated. No need for the grain of salt here... after all, you don't need to be an expert to know when something feels off. I'm working on a different piece right now, but I'll see about making some changes to this one before I finish it.
Erotibot
2015-12-11 23:47:04 +0000 UTC
I'm no expert so take it with a grain of salt - but I feel the perspective of her arm might be a bit odd. It's obviously coming toward us, yet it feels like it isn't foreshortened enough ? The hand resting on Bowser looks very small as a result (or he's huuuge) ... maybe a good fix would be to make it a bit bigger ? I don't know. Nice sketch anyway :)
Rei K
2015-12-11 13:29:47 +0000 UTC
Yep! Any WIPs posted here will usually get the line and color treatment.