Monday: Director's Cut
Added 2021-08-03 08:23:41 +0000 UTCSometimes I get a little too tied up on one part of a strip (in this case, the sound effects, all of which came from actual Don Martin comics) and neglect others. Upon re-reading, it occurred to me that the sound effects needed at least a little action to make them "fit" the strip better. So I added some parts and tools being flung about, which I think ties it together a bit better.
I also redid the fellows' arm in the last panel to make the pose look a little more natural, added a bit of a scowl, and slightly redid his dialogue.
Sometimes things just need a little retconning. :D
Doc.
Comments
FWEEN! is still one of my favorites. Maybe also my next band's name...
Chris Neal
2021-08-07 15:37:21 +0000 UTCThis was great!
Delisle
2021-08-05 00:04:26 +0000 UTCYou forgot one of my favorites: KLOON!
Tom Hancock
2021-08-04 23:39:39 +0000 UTCEven better than your first version.
Walter W Matera
2021-08-03 16:21:08 +0000 UTCOh, how I miss the old-timie MindAD Magazine!
Darque Hellmutt
2021-08-03 12:59:06 +0000 UTCThis was a very good gag, by the by.
Jim Sharkey
2021-08-03 10:49:31 +0000 UTC
