Bonus Content - The Editing Outline
Added 2024-02-07 02:00:01 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
Over the last couple months, I've shown you the two new systems I'm working to implement in FoA's second draft. This month, I've got something a little different—this is essentially my working, revised outline of the game.
As you may notice as you give it a look, I'm changing some things even as I go, and I've put off some decisions about how things should go just because I'm not totally sure how the new stuff I'm adding is going to affect things yet. (Basically anywhere I say "currently, X is the case" I'm making a note of something that probably needs changing but I don't have exactly down yet.
You can probably also tell that most of my big revisions, with adding scenes and things, are in the first half of the game. This is partly because the back half is so much more packed, in terms of pacing and actual events happening, so there was more 'room' at the beginning, but also because it was what I wrote first, and I'm revising now with the end of the game in mind, too.
Anyway, have a look if you'd like!
