Originally the "trying to be perfect is not a strength, Nes" was going to be on this page, but I moved it to an earlier page because I felt it was stronger there, and silence was stronger here. I also made the top panel a perspective shot rather than a profile shot, since I felt having Nes fill the frame felt more imposing, and felt more dramatic. Finally, I also made shadow Nes way more fearful of the coming impact rather than just accepting it. I felt it would make him look more sympathetic. x3