Couples idea: matching lingerie sets
Added 2020-10-21 15:35:10 +0000 UTCSorry, no story poll today! It will come up later this week, after I finalised some things regarding the ending of v0.10. For now, please enjoy this picture from Vanessa's sub route :)
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The one thing that I know about this is that there is no greater critic about any artwork, than what the artist themselves are.
Leslie Campbell
2020-10-22 13:40:54 +0000 UTCAgain, thank you very much :) Yes, I saw your previous comment in the notification, but it was gone when I tried to find it. My main focus with the «restoration» is on the visuals, don't worry. However, while I get what you're saying (that the audience isn't complaining), it's kinda survivor's bias. Basically, the game gets a lot better after the first chapters, so if you liked them (to any extent), of course you're gonna stay with me. But if you saw them and were like «nah», then it's over, and you won't return. This is what I want to fix. Worry not, however, I won't be rewriting everything. Probably not even 25%. Just the stuff that I didn't like back then, and don't like now.
Yeda Games
2020-10-22 10:43:26 +0000 UTC/2 ...and you created something better, so that's why I replied to your remake of Candy. Whatever you've got going on, keep doing it. You're mixing writing, visuals, visual themes, and general storytelling to arrive at a powerful conjunction. For whatever it's worth, character transformation (does that adequately describe what's happening here?) isn't a personal desire or kink of mine - it's just such a damn good story! Yeah, you keep doing you - you're goddamn good at it and it's worth supporting. :)
Merlin1941
2020-10-22 08:31:01 +0000 UTCI don't know if you saw my rambling post on artist self-loathing before it succumbed to Patreon whatever, but I was trying to talk about "good v. best" as creative minds see it. You (and I) are kind of a classic example, where you (I) look at something done in the past and say, "That's not up to my standard, I can do better." It's a kind of service and delusion at the same time. It's a declaration to improve, and acknowledgement that the craft is *good enough* as it is. I was speaking to your desire to rework the first chapter, and I was advocating against it, since you had already set a fantastic background and had backed it up with excellent writing and visuals. Basically, if your audience isn't complaining, you crafted your story well; it's not broken, so don't attempt to fix it. But you did.../1
Merlin1941
2020-10-22 08:22:26 +0000 UTCThank you very much! People rarely comment on my pictures, and in my own opinion they're mostly serviceable, or mediocre to bad, so it's nice to get some positive acknowledgement :)
Yeda Games
2020-10-22 07:13:38 +0000 UTCThat scene perspective! One of the reasons I decided to contribute here after first discovering Shattered was your framing of scenes, use of color/lighting/perspective for characters, and strong writing skills. 3/3 visuals on display here. Love it!
Merlin1941
2020-10-22 04:49:59 +0000 UTCOh hell yeah! :)
The Wandering Talespinner
2020-10-21 15:35:52 +0000 UTC
