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Dorothy pencils 2

I'M GONNA FIX THE DOROTHY ART, by god, I've become determined.  So I've gone back to pencils.  

I've elongated her torso a bit, since I think the proportions problem was partly due to making her a little too squat.  Also that belly button was way too high.  

Dorothy pencils 2

Comments

It amuses me.

David Willis

I've always wondered: is there a particular reason you draw characters pubic hair with the same hairstyle has their heads?

CrownCorvus

Looking better in my opinion, but still not quite there. To me, it feels like her upper torso is too wide, chest more so than shoulders. Dorothy is slim, almost, but not quite, petite. With that bigger torso automatically comes a larger, wider abdomen. Maybe try working from that angle?

Ursus Bavaricus

"We can rebuild her, we have the technology. We have the capability to make the world's first bionic Dorothy." *Insert The Six Million Dollar Dorothy theme here* But seriously, nice work Willis. It does look better already. I can't wait to see the finished result.

Colton

tl;dr: it's abs

David Willis

It's the rectus abdominis, which is characterized by its muscle trench going up and down the abdomen. It definitely exists, but is often shorthanded in cartoons when you're not allowed to draw belly buttons because those are too smexy.

David Willis

YES!! Willis is on a MISSION!!!!!! Look forward t'the results!

J R Quilcon

okay so like, what is that line running up from the belly button, why does so much sexy art of ladies have it, i feel like i've never actually seen this on another human being

Seth Aaron Hershman has they she pronouns


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