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Sucking Up To Death: Chapter 1 - Page 19

I probably did get carried away with single-panel comics. I'll think about how and when I should use it more carefully. Thoughts and comments are very much appreciated 🧡

Sucking Up To Death: Chapter 1 - Page 19

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OH i think i get what you mean now. I'll take that into account moving forward. TYSM for the feedback!!

Helbai

This particular panel is very good on its own. I have no complaints, but here are some thoughts: The interaction of him calling back to Roi and then hearing "...I'm only after you" is great, but is split between panels. I also feel that the image of Henri looking back in fear in this most recent panel is much stronger for the narrative than the prior image of him calling back to Roi. Perhaps that prior panel could be incorporated as a small cutout near the top of this panel.

TAC


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