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I loved how large the claw was in the first game, is it at all possible to make the claw larger? I dunno why but the idea of this massive claw on one hand just really sticks in my mind

I like this make up alot better than the current pieces. But I love the current look better

female day of the dead facepaint would be cool also, for the hair maybe harleyquin hair but black and red at the tips or vice versa, just an idea

I like this clown paint the best

Much prefer this design, so awesome

Like yes pretty!!!😍😍😍😍🤡🤡

Awesome!😍💀🤡🔪👏

Very💀🤡🔪

Yes like

SUGGESTION: if the violet patch appears in-game as a power-up, couldn't it be a myosotis aka forget-me-not flower instead? (Just make the flower blue or build something around its "mouse ear" etymology). Lately it became a memorabilia for disappeared/abused children. And in the 1980's Alice animated series, its juice is used to fight the effects of the nameless forest (episode 9).

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This version I like more than the previous one, the wig would take it away, it would leave the hair long. (Maybe reddish) But the dress, boots, etc. is incredible!

I also like the idea of the outfits upgrading as well as the weapons. Good idea! And I also like the idea of the rabbit slowly turning less plush/like her rabbit in the real world and more like the actual rabbit as you go through the levels in the game. Hopefully that is what you were thinking too.

I absolutely love the circus dress! The black hat is not doing it for me. But the red one might. It can also do without a hat and perhaps some hair ornaments would do instead! The hair is very extraordinary in of itself. Much better colors as well! I am loving it. And as for the rage dress, I am liking the idea. But I am not sure about the dress looking a bit too much like the classic dress. Make it differentiate a bit more! But the horns and the color red are brilliant.

I personally feel a mix of the two would look nice.

Circus wig is incredible! Love the new look.

Loving the new circus dress and the return of the rage dress

_Loved the dresses (yay! Rage Dress is back! >:D ) _Loved the Rabbit progression SUGGESTION: I don't like the idea of putting patches all over the dresses... Maybe that same idea can be implemented but with the alchemy symbols instead? And for MORE customization I'll suggest having each dress with various unlockable alternative colors. It could be unlocked by doing specific achievements, collecting certain amount of items or maybe you can buy them with chaos coins :)

I much prefer this iteration of the clown dress to the initial one. The wig certainly looks appropriate for a clown, and I like it better than the last cut, but I'm still not sure that I'm sold on it. I particularly like the rage dress. The streaming red and outfit says 'rage' to me though the overall effect falls somewhat short in my view. SUGGESTION: Rage is aggressive and I think while the outfit is selling it, the pose needs to reflect that more. The passive stance could look a little more like Alice is ready for a fight: arms out, hands in front and clawed, a snarl while attacking. Right now it feels 'rather angry' as opposed to a barely contained 'rage'.

Since the Circus Dress is something Alice is being forced to wear, perhaps it shouldn't have an Active (ON) Mode, so there's no powered-up state. Alice must thus find her own strength to free herself from the Tweedles.

I loooooove this "Tweedle-Dress" <3 even the hair this time xD I'm usually not a fan of changing her hair too much, but this is a kind of circus dress (supposedly she is in a circus at that point) so for me, changing the hair absolutely works this time. About the Rage-Dress... I would like to see a few changes from the original dress. It doesn't have to be a completely new dress but a little more than just the same dress in red. Also the horns... kinda like them and don't like them at the same time xD Not really sure about that part, yet. I absolutely looove the rabbit and the stages of him transforming into the one we already know from the earlier games. and YES I definitly want a plushy-rabbit <3 <3 <3

I'm liking the new design for the clown "dress". The only thing I don't like are the random spots around on it. Also I think you should go with the alternate hat, the point will go well with the hairstyle.

V--R

Better. Stick with the smaller black and white hat. The boots are gorgeous. I like the inversion of colors on the tights. Almost makes it seem like something is off or a joke/parody of her normal look.

I love the circus idea. Especially since I use to be a ringmaster and magician for a cicis for most my life. This would be absolutely amazing.

Yes I really love that idea

I really love the circus dress! Cosplay plan for sure! Also very keen for a Rabbit plush! Keep up the great work

As for the Rabbit plush, I'm imagining one of those invertible dolls. So on the outside it's the cute, original toy, but you can turn it inside out and it becomes the transformed version. Maybe you could do that for the Cheshire cat as well? Might not work as well, mind.

Rob Burch

Loving the new dresses. And the patch idea is awesome. I would love to have a White Rabbit plush, and a couple more. I would REALLY love a Figma/Figuarts styled Alice figure with a lot of articulation and accessories.

Rob Burch

Love the rage Alice :3 Nice work improving the previous circus dress this one is WAY better.

I do like the Circus Dress better this time around. I feel like the wig needs some work. QUESTION/SUGGESTION: Can Omri try even more variation of wigs and see which one really stick? I kinda like the Rage Dress. QUESTION: The hands are uneven, did Omri do that intentionally? The White Rabbit concept is interesting, I like the transformation as Alice become more delusional.

I love it and I think the wig is an awesome idea, and having Alice pull the wig off when she rebels would be pretty awesome.

Just not digging the hair. The rest is cool by me however.

I like this dress much more, it gives a more circus atmosphere with its colour scheme and reminds me of porcelain clown dolls. It also fits in more with the Tweedles, I imagine having her forced to dress up to look like them (to conform with others) and to play along with their twisted games and sing. The hair style i'm still unsure of, but I like its bold colour and thats its a wig, when she rebels against the Tweedles she pulls it off to maybe show a different hairstyle, possibly a double Dutch braid or a Ponytail?

I am very impressed with the new Circus dress! The hair is better, the general design of the dress is better, I think this is a much better expression of the concept overall! I also love the Rage dress design! Brings back fond memories.

Rhia

Hm well this looks a little more cohesive to the pic of the tweedles and a vague circus theme, so kudo's for that. it will feel natural, though I still worry about her standing out enough for gameplay to go unhindered... The hair i don't mind. At least the general style. When shifting the two pigtails from pointing up, or down, from forward to middle, to back behind her head, each position conveys a slightly different emotion or stance. Something to consider for the final design. The makeup i think works, as in a way I can see the Tweedles seeing her as their own little porcelain puppet to use in their show and so would try to retain some degree to loooking "perfect" . I also can see her face slowly developing cracks as she resists the emotionaless puppet look she has and the tweedles getting angry or impatient with her through the level, eventually seeing her as so imperfect that she has no place in their circus anymore... or the opposite, and that all of wonderland's imperfect beings end up in their circus, making her a prisoner. Then you have this theme of what is perfection ? What is an ideal? How far should one go to attain it (physically, emotionally, psychologically?) The rage concept I'm middled on. It looks "sufficient" for what you are going for. But that doesn't mean striking, significant or innovative. The horns feel plump and cartoonish like that. I would assume in rage mode she is in a pure-aggression state, so the horns should reflect that. Think "Deathclaw" from Fallout more than Warner Brothers bulls' horns. And the overall motif , as well as how it would potentially kick in with ALL her outfits... I guess think of how exactly she channels her rage. What is she mad about? emotionally, where does it stem? I could see her split across her clothes and skin with volcanic cracks spewing embers if you want that burning hot rage(which would be a quick retexture or just solid tessellation mapping). Or if her rage is channeled from her own inner demons and darkness, perhaps having her explode into an inky swirling black cloud of soot (allowing for a model swap) and looking like a more wirey, line sketched slender(woman?) who then is tearing through everything with long black claws or a jagged lengthy knife/blade and when it wears out doing a flourish that allows for swapping her prior model back in. I just feel like the "fade to red, give it horns" has been WAY too overdone and feels like a cliche. I imagine you want to make this game striking and visually unique so it really draws attention and fall straight out and apart from the usual crap out there.... though maybe I am wrong? The white rabbit I think is a kool idea too. having it transition is a nice touch. Question: could it be possible to follow a black rabbit too? Or it could be the white rabbit's shadow.. Will the game have branching elements that can vary gameplay and also allow for a slightly more dynamic alteration of Alice's progress?

Sterling Treadwell

Clowns are irritates me, I don't know why. I pledged, can't wait for the coin and to leave a message in the game. <3

sumblinker

I’d love a White Rabbit plush!!! Would a Cheshire Cat one be possible too?

Also, the idea that the rabbit becomes more "real" as she goes down though her mental process, and the thought of building new outfits to show progress, both fit perfectly into that idea of psychological growth and healing. You often get worse before you get better, you know?

I'd LOVE to see that Rage dress in the game! It would flow so well into the first Alice game, where that form had HUGE horns.

Love the new circus dress, but I liked the corset and hip shape on the first design a bit more. But I definitely love this one regardless. Killer work as always Omri!

The circus dress is better now kind of but her makeup and hair is still.. well not good at all to put it nicely. I mean even if you don't change the hair (which i hope does change) PLEASE PLEASE change the makeup!!! The rage dress is cool but the horns don't go for some reason. Maybe if they were a different shape or color.

I now kinda like the dress. I still Hate the wig. Just give her normal hair and PLEASE no make up eyebrows. Looks terrible drawn on. Still, my very least favorite overall. -_-

I liked the old styled circus outfit but this also has its pluses, I like that it looks like the Tweedles circus outfits. The updated rage outfit is lovely, was one of my favorite parts of the original game. It was super satisfying and she arched back and transformed. The patches on the dresses idea is interesting, I'm curious to see where that goes if it gets implemented. Joined the discord but haven't said anything yet, lurking naturally. Also, love the progression of the white rabbit from plush to full bunny.

Patches belong on the rabbit plush instead. But I really wouldn't like silly cosplayers to treat plushies meant to be our friends as fashion accessories.

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I desperately want a white rabbit plush! Personally something about the hair is just a little off for me as well, reminds me of Burton mad hatter. I have been a little out of the loop but will hysteria be making a come back as well? Or is rage the replacement? Either way it is amazing and customizing her dresses seems absolutely amazing

Thoughts for the clown. Still meh for me....no tutu or Amanda Palmer brows! Haha on a lighter note I love the Rage dress. I will ask were you wanting this dress to stay the same as original. Either way I do love it. THE WHITE RABBIT!!!! Absolutely love this concept. I can imagine her looking at him at 70-80% and being completely horrified at what her lovie is turning into (“Rabbit, what has happened to you? Is my mind taking a toll on you as well?) Now Will the stream be on a different day this week or not at all? I will never say it again but I am glad since my birthday is tomorrow and I would’ve had to miss the stream! Happy Birthday to me!!!! Thanks for the awesome update 🌹❤️

Can the original circus dress still make it in if there's going to be options? :D

rage dress looks just WOW! beautiful, no words Also I really like idea with the rabbit But.....ugh circus dress is better, but hair is...it's like something wrong with it..

My main Alice reference is 1980's Fushigi no Kuni no Arisu in which Benny Bunny is White Rabbit's nephew. Not a real reason other than nostalgia to say that Alice's plushy needs not host a wererabbit unless the process is reversible. SUGGESTION: I noticed there's no element/metal assigned to circus dress. So I thought quicklime (calcium oxide) like in limelight (invented 1820). Its (alternate) alchemy symbol looks cool too <a href="https://www.symbols.com/gi.php?type=1&amp;id=2812&amp;i=1" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.symbols.com/gi.php?type=1&amp;id=2812&amp;i=1</a> (like two psi letters 69ing).

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I'd love a White Rabbit plush toy, however I think i'm partial to the one with all the stitches holding him together and the missing eye.

John L

hi there, Ronald McDee

on another note I personally don't like the idea of being able to collect patches and add them to her dress, I just think it would take away from the beauty of the dresses. Example would be that she's in a dress like the Blackening Dress or the Harvest Dress but then has a dancing oyster patch randomly placed on it

Hannah Young

SUGGESTION: I love the new look for the Circus Dress, maybe there could be a force smile painted on her face to symbolize her being forced to take her medication at the Asylum. SUGGESTION: I saw Ina suggest a Chaos Bag and I love that Idea but what about an Asylum Bag/Purse? The bag/purse could look like it was made from a strait-jacket.

Hannah Young

I'm very glad to hear that the White Rabbit is going to have a big part in the game. He was one of my favorite characters from the first game and I was disappointed that he wasn't in Madness Returns very much. Also... I WANT A WHITE RABBIT PLUSH!!!

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The Rage Dress is AWESOME! The claws and horns are amazing, definetely one of the best dress!! A rabbit plush could be an amazing reward for next goal! Are you going to make another vlog during your "mission" in YiWu?

I am obsessed with this version of the Circus Dress! It's much, much better than the previous one, I have to agree. Same goes for the rage dress, I am delighted to see a shout out to the first game. My favourite thing has to be the rabbit though, I'd love to see a plush version of it! I also support Ina's suggestion to make a Chaos bag. Lots of merchandise please!!!

This outfit looks way better! But I'm still not a fan of the hair. Maybe just make her hair red but give her regular pigtails? The rage dress is really good too! I love that it's like the one in the first game.

The rage dress is amazing, I love it! I’m not quite sure how it fits in the theme of the game but Omris art is so beautiful. The circus dress is better in my opinion than the last one, but I would still like to see it with Alices own hair, maybe pigtails or space buns (that might be too modern tho). But on the other hand the wig may be a better fit for a scene where Alice is forced to perform, even if I don’t like the look of it so much.

Yeah they should bring back grashopper tea and the mirror too. Customizing Alice would be a great option.

sumblinker

I'm absolutely overjoyed at the idea of another Rage dress, that was my FAVORITE powerup from the first game, I'm so excited to see that come to life in the game!!

I like the circus hair, shame on me but reminds of Depp's hair from the movie. :D

sumblinker

Love the new clown outfit and the rage dress and especially love the idea of a rabbit plush toy

On a side note I'm so excited about plushies!

Okay, first, that rage dress is killing it. She looks terrifyingly spectacular. I think the clown dress (leotard?) looks much better now except I have to agree with what was mentioned before, it's very reminiscent of Tim Burton's mad hatter. Other than that everything is just coming together really nicely!

i’m loving the new version of the circus outfit. customisable outfit in game based on collectibles? yes please! visualising game progress via rabbit is also a great concept.

I thought the same thing about the hair

Love the new Circus Dress! The wig is crazy, I really can't decide what to think of it. Totally on board with the idea of being able to customize Alice's dress with power ups, and while the idea of doing so with our patches is pretty cool, I'm not sure if it would look good on the actual dresses in game. The runes are more easily replaceable and unobtrusive, but perhaps less interesting in comparison. Rage Mode is definitely fitting for a 13 year old teenage girl! :b Really like the chart for the White Rabbit and I'm excited for him to play a bigger part in Alices' journey. SUGGESTION #1: Maybe Rage Mode is an early power up mode and as she progresses, she learns to control her anger and the power mode changes. Maybe she generally has different power modes based on the different stages of the grief cycle. Maybe she keeps the different power modes she gather through the game, and the can be placed on the dress like a rune, customizing both her look and player style; go head strong into battle with rage mode or sneak away from enemies with an invisibility/stealth mode. SUGGESTION #2: Maybe you could make a Chaos shoulder bag to sell on Mysterious, that would be cool to put our patches on. Not leather, but a canvas material perhaps? Maybe something a bit like this, with a "Mysterious" twist? <a href="http://www.boheme.net.au/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/6631-satchel-grey.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.boheme.net.au/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/6631-satchel-grey.jpg</a> Or this <a href="http://www.boheme.net.au/wp-content/uploads/2017/09/14-CANVAS-BAG-WP-16928-1-GREY.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.boheme.net.au/wp-content/uploads/2017/09/14-CANVAS-BAG-WP-16928-1-GREY.jpg</a>

I love how the new outfit looks. I think her face needs more makeup. Not a fan of her winged hair. Would love a different hat maybe. Maybe a small top hat of some sort off to the side? The rest of the outfit is amazing though. Like the rage outfit a lot. Also love the progressing of the white rabbit.

Sry but still not a fan of the idea that Alice should wear a clown outfit...as a female i would prefer- not to be a clown at the circus- and a little young girl like Alice (that's just my opinion) too i think. Plus if she is going to sing, why should she even wear such an outfit? I really don't get it...that's why i draw her in a more "leader"like-circus jacked with the tweedle's colorings+dots on it. But that is just how i see it. Anyways the Rage dress is cute kinda like the last time i like that. Have a great day.

Jessi St.

OK...... this clown dress is much better, but I'm still not sure about what's going on in the middle (the transition between the top and the skirt), might just be the whole skirt section not being an actual skirt..... but the rest of it is ace ^_^

Catheryn Alice North

I would love to see a white rabbit plush but the dresses are bothering me with all the extras, in madness returns it was kind of dumb when Alice would magically change dresses and you couldn't really go back to the one you wanted while you did your first play, I think if dresses are necessary then they should be used like batsuits in the batman arkham games being unlocked but not just randomly on maybe an outfit changer on the pause menu. I enjoyed how simple the first game was: your basic platform with puzzles and more things to unlock along the way.

The Rage Dress is amazing, one of my favourites, I love red! ;) Can't say much to the Circus Dress, looks good but not as breathtaking as other dresses, the White Rabbit is great! ^^

St. Thomas

Love the clown dress now and the hair is so much better! I like the hat that isn't on her head better than the hat that is, looks a bit too umpire-ish. The rabbit is cool but I agree with the earlier comment about somethings up with the ears, I think maybe they need to shrink more before the final lifted position as they go from big and floppy to small and upright in one jump

I'm SO HAPPY that you guys are looking at her original dresses! The rage one is amazing but will it have the back spikes like her original(maybe add some more blood stains)? And will you be looking at her grasshopper tea dress? So keen to see what you guys do!

DeBri

try looking at clown and female circus costumes of her time period.

much better then the last version of this dress, but something is still missing...

I just want to make chaos cookies now. Thanks xD

Sarah Heist

Huge fan of everything, as always. SUGGESTION: for the clown/forced performance, it might be interesting/go along with her inner turmoil/existential dread--her new awareness of death inciting her own sense of mortality/time-- if that monologue (which is my absolute favorite) were to be said/repeated by the tweedles, mockingly, overlapping and rising in intensity throughout the bit, at the end rising to a crescendo to the point she passes out.. Sidenote thought/SUGGESTION: In that era/time period, certain cases of mentally ill patients were brought before the scholars studying to be sanatorium doctors as a sort of demonstration/example. (See ref: Stonehearst Asylum) Perhaps here is what could be a real world anchor of feeling forced to perform even in her delusioned/twisted state.

Sarah Heist

I like this dress better than the other circus dress, but I still don't think it is dark enough. However I do like the idea of allowing the player to customize the dresses, as long as we can make them dark and creepy 😊. I also do like the rabbit evolutions and the rage dress.

PS, I love the Rage throwback to original game.

I love this new dress!!! it fits so much better and the hair is better too!! A 100% better!!!

I would LOVE to see a rabbit plush!!

Much prefer the dress &amp; hair for the clown outfit. Cant wait to see this in game!

About the rabbit evolution: 1. Face / legs / body / clothes all spot on. 2. The ears. The solution of "they lift in a single motion" seems like an after thought. There wasn't a compositional idea for how they begin to lift. There appears to be a lot of thought in the rest of it, but something just seems off with the ears. I may think different if I could see it in action. I don't have alternative solution for it either though. Perhaps some brain storming is in order.

I love this dress! The idea of collecting dresses and gathering material has my inner gamer drooling with anticipation! So to that i say yes. Patches would make for an interesting game+ option or collectable. The white rabbit as a goal... my son could use another plush!

RozaMay

Loving the dresses and the White rabbit evolutions

Ashley Lopez

Like the cheshire cat said “your enemies are lucky your condition isn’t permanent, your lucky too red eyes suit so very few” i would love to see the return of alice in a rage form

Much much better! I'm still not a big fan of the hair, but I can accept this look way more than the mother cut she previously had. I could see the hair looking better with low set curly pigtails, but that might be too cutesy for Alice. 🤔

Destiny Jenson

Love the White rabbit evolution! Not in love with the hair on the new circus outfit, it reminds me too much of Johnny Depp's mad hatter. :/ the pigtail type thing would be cool, maybe with longer hair? Hair colors good though. Idk just a thought.

Yes to all the things! The white Rabbit being more involved in the narrative, the revised dress and the new one. Credit to Omri for taking the suggestions on board and knocking out a winning revision for sure, great talent that lad.

For the Cheshire patch you mentioned i imagine it having some form of "invisibility dodge". Alice fades out from one location and then fades back in a short distance away. Kind of like Madness Returns but then spiced up a little. Or out of combat, teleport to higher unreachable areas by jumps for secrets and such.

Love the Rage dress and the circus dress? I loved the first version and this is just getting better! Also, I like the evolution of the White Rabbit. Very cool. Makes me want a white rabbit plush of my own.

Now this is a circus dress. Love it!!!

Okay I have to admit that redesign is very good, better than the last one. As I like to say I can't wait to see how the cosplayers will bring this one to life. I would like to get a plush toy of the white rabbit.

Lucas Severin

LOVE this! I was a fan of the last one too, but I like how the hips were brought down.

Rhiannon Vanderlinden

Now her hair is both clownish and elizabethan. Love it. And Chaos Cookies please XD Cephalopods are blue on the inside.

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Loving all these hairstyle variations.

Justin Cole