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The Explorer Chapter 109

The Explorer Chapter 109

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R-127

He didn’t really know what to expect when his mentor, his wife-to-be and Ais decided to face Balor Either italicize the second his or add (mentor’s) in front of wife-to-be. It reads kind of wonky otherwise. Also you have a stray E at the end of one of your paragraphs.

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