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[1% LIFESTEAL] Chapter 157 - Beware the Reflection

[AUTHOR'S NOTE]
My head hurts. I'm exhausted

Comments

This must have been a head trip to write

Stan McDonald

909% ?

ThoMiCroN

He should keep a journal of what happened before he entered his seclusion. He might forget who’s who later, even with his great memory.

ThoMiCroN

Where are the remains of the five-six other delvers that went there?

ThoMiCroN

He made made->has made* the decision not to track the time as it passed.

ThoMiCroN

Great job author!!!!

Kalmitrix

Didn't Freddy create an ability for his sharpnel attack ?

nicolas

This was an extremely creepy chapter. I couldn't tell if there was a ghost or if it was all in his head.

Gunmetalrhino

This is so creepy I love it. It's a different kind of tension that gets my heart pumping!

Sean T

Well done sir.

Khent Mercer

Can tell that you put a lot of effort into this one, it’s absolutely fantastic and takes on this disturbing surrealist feel. I like it.

BeanConsumer

I really felt The Jester of The Apocalypse in this chapter. But your writing has already improved so much from when you wrote those chapters that this 5-chapter chapter is supreme-quality in comparison xD

@Alphamoonman

perfect chapter loved it

CrimZ0N

I wonder if the shadow will end up being another spirit ability? It’ll make getting to fourth star a very long grind though.

Teagan Symons

From the third one on you need to really meditate but even beforehand you have to survive quite a bit of shit to reach the third star not to mention gathering is quite difficult for those not rich and mighty Freddy merely has his scythe to speed shit up quite a bit. Or at least that was how I understood it.

Random Guy

Really? I thought those difficulties only STARTED at third, and then continued into 4, 5th, ect.

Marquess

Its suposed to be extremly hard to get to even the third star. Even reaching the second star is quite the acomplishment for the regular shmuck from the street.

Random Guy

It sticks with Freddy's destiny. I think he will be even more radical in his mindset and river of bloods will flow when he thinks something fucked up

Chibrahim

Bloodshed sees Freddy more than a person, he sees him as a concept. An harbringer of death and blood

Chibrahim

Its just not finished yet! His soul just can't handle any more abilities at the second star.

Robert Blaise

I might be missing something but what about that shrapnel orb attack? Was that not a technique?

Mojanks

Yes, but only if you are stronger than me and only read 1 chapter worth of content from this beast of a chappy

atgongumerki

It will come when it comes lmao. This chapter really took it out of me. Just it alone was already like 2.5x my usual weekly output. But, well, we'll see how I'm feelin' :)

Robert Blaise

What an absolutely amazing chapter, thank you for all the effort and passion put into that. I’ve never seen a solitude training “arc” be so enjoyable to read each part of growth felt rewarding and worthwhile as well as the mental aspects Freddy faced.

LittleGarrett

Legend! This is how it's done!!

Bradley

Damn, too bad for them. Either they're hoping for crazy benefits when they attain their third star, or they got stuck hella' early.

Marquess

What a beaut. Clever solution to not having him ascend to some weird unrelatable century-old hermit mindset: focusing on doing stuff and not on thinking. Very on-brand for Freddicus. I like that it's implied he's basically a grandmaster of his own body and combat style now, that'll be cool. Genuinely impressed he went an entire hundred years without making a new ability. But he wasn't really trying to think, so it checks out. Also, next chapter probably comes out today right? ^^

Guy

I’m confused by his skeleton asking him what’s wrong with going a little insane. Is there something more we’re meant to understand from that interaction?

Petersaurus reximus reader

Truly, shadow demon and bloodshed reaaaallly didn't help with that shit. And just when he was starting to fit back onto society a lil more. Lucas is gonna have a he'll of a job assembling the pieces back into someone who can truly interact with society

Beeees!

He didnt even reach a peacefull mindset as you thought he would. He is just straight up crazy and he will be even worse socially. Not even the wise hermit kind of crazy !

Chibrahim

Man, you did it. Now go to sleep, took some time to relax and recover. This chapter is a absolute masterpiece

Evaldo

Absolutely amazing

Hazer0508

I am quite sure that there are older 2 stars if I dont misremember the timeline,

Random Guy

well good luck if its the later xD

Random Guy

I was thinking it as to do with capturing the spirits of thing that die in the water, or befriending the leviathan spirit

Redc05

I agree! This was a very cool chapter that brought feelings of Freddy slowly losing it similar to Jester

Brian

Our boy damn near died, but he pulled through in the end! Can't wait to see the reward!

DuskDeadman

the whole situation with the phantom feels like a reverse of 1st book Jester

atgongumerki

it's just another of his visual halucinations, totally in line with the chapter at whole

atgongumerki

Nope

Robert Blaise

Excellent chapter, can’t wait for the next.

Fischer Price

I'm guessing the perished water is actually at level 3, 50% that's why it can't increase past 50%

Gio

Really? 100 years and both perished water abilities got no increase?

Redc05

I'm experiencing qi deviation

Robert Blaise

Is the meadow perhaps the reward, or can he no longer return to Repentawa the way he came? Either way, he’s probably the oldest 2-star alive, by a long shot. That HAS to be worth something when he becomes 3-star, right? Ps: “Gore Knuckles: Stage 2—909% Progress (Ready to Upgrade)” Was this intentional or are you going insane too?

Marquess

crazy stuff, thanks for the chapter!

Lars de Tombe

What a fantastic experience. I love the fact that even at the end there, you can't be sure if he actually finished. Maybe this is the next stage if there's still a visitor alive at the midpoint.

thaughton2

Completely impossible and yes that's a mistake lol. As you can imagine, editing a 15k word chapter is a bit of a nightmare 💀

Robert Blaise

He is always the overachiever Gore Knuckles: Stage 2—909% Progress (Ready to Upgrade) I know this is a mistake but can you get it above 100% in any way or is this completely impossible?

Kai

Let's fucking goooo. Bro really lost his marble on that one

Chibrahim

awesome chapter

Gio

Honestly, lately I've been thinking about whether to renew my subscription or not, but after such a chapter and such a storm of emotions) The question is no longer there

Юрий Коненко

Thank you very much :D

Robert Blaise

Ця глава дуже класна♥️

Юрий Коненко

You know how ya boy is. Even a mega chapter needs a cliff :D

Robert Blaise

Ok, that was definitely the most engaging and crazy chapter of this whole series. Our boy is gonna be a fucking machine when he gets out of whatever fresh he'll he just walked into

Beeees!

Thank you so much for this treasure of a chapter!

Zachary W Jensen

Why did you add the last part :c

A_name4me

Love the mindfuck chappy

Chris Fox

Brother I have like three practicals today I need to study. you can’t be dropping a mega chapter on me like this I’m going to fail 💀💀 Fr though thanks for the chapter can’t wait to read it👍🏻

Logan

Thanks for the chapter ☺

Harami666

Thanks for the unbelievably chunky chapter! Now go rest, you've earned it

Beeees!


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