XaiJu
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New Avatar for Jane

I've started working with an artist to try and improve the art in the game. While this artist is better than me, she also uses a different style, so, I figured I'd share the first avatar that's been finished to see what you all think of it. To see the version that isn't messed with by Patreon's automatic resizing, you can click here: http://i.imgur.com/ExDMzx8.png

New Avatar for Jane

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Nice work! I didn't have any problem with the visuals of the game so far, but this is superb! With your writing and this art could be the best of both worlds! Ps: (Even though I loved the little inside joke of the background with the houses. :P)

Kuroihana

Kawaii

Darth Xelleon

I have not found out yet; she didn't have any examples on hand with nudity. I will probably try to get an example from her as soon as possible.

Changer

Yeah, I actually had her reduce the size of the eyes from the original draft, but I think she's a bit reluctant to do. I can see if she'll be willing to reduce the size of the eyes more.

Changer

It's better.... but can they draw tits?

ONI

The eyes look a bit too big compared to her nose and mouth. It's very distracting and draws attention away from everything else (everything, not just her nose and mouth). Other than that, It looks good.

DJ Quinn


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