Soldier 263 and 264 moved to book 5 collection from Seraphim
Added 2025-05-18 20:38:44 +0000 UTCMoved it today because I am driving a lot tomorrow. Soldier Seraphim Cahpter 393 is coming tonight. Just passed halfway point
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No one knows for sure as it was just the first draft. The chapters will be rewritten to hopefully give more agency/reason to the MC actions. I am currently working on book 5 which has its own problems. It serves as a plot trigger for the final books in the series as it brings the MC face to face with a member of the First Legion. Just an FYI, the origional plot was the MC trying to find a way back to Earth, but why would he want to leave. So I had to introduce a reason for him to work on solving the World Gates - the young otherworlders
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-23 15:10:07 +0000 UTCDoes anyone know if the author is still committing story suicide by book 7. The pathetic hamstringing of the horribly inserted "otherworldly damsels" is by far the sloppiest and worst written arc I've seen so far with the least amount of character development. Would a kind soul who pays for the crazy teir let me know if the author recovered by book 7 cause the fact it's named after the dead island where he's leaving the magical girl who he's devoted his life to after metting for 5 minutes is quite worrying for me and my friends and none of us have the crazy high tier. Thanks!
Jacob Goodwin
2025-05-23 14:59:06 +0000 UTCHe’s more machine than man.
Alias
2025-05-18 20:50:56 +0000 UTCOk
NSaaby
2025-05-18 20:44:21 +0000 UTC
