A Soldier's Life - 360 - Reacquainting Myself With the City (edited 3-18-25 +150 words)
Added 2025-03-16 03:01:42 +0000 UTCChapter 360: Reacquainting Myself With the City
I woke in one of the guest rooms of the villa but didn’t quite remember getting myself here. Why did I stop using purify self spell form to eliminate the alcohol in my system? I rolled out of the bed in slow motion and pulsed my healing and purify self spell forms to clear my head.
I recalled I had wanted to let go and enjoy the celebration, first challenging Konstantin and then Benito to a drinking contest. My pounding head faded quickly. I really should have just cheated. I walked to the door and began to orient myself in the small villa. I made my way toward the smell of cooking food.
The kitchen was immaculate, and a middle-aged woman sat as she kneaded dough. Cast iron skillets sizzled with meat and vegetables, and loaves of bread were already baking in the oven. A young girl was at the table reading—or studying—a book. Both the cook and girl turned to me.
I recognized the girl with her thin blonde hair. “Clara, you’ve grown into a beautiful woman,” I said, smiling at her. It had been a year and a half since I last saw her. I had been ordered to kill her brother and her but instead captured them in my dimensional space and eventually released them in Gramney with their mother, Viridia.
The girl broke into a smile at the compliment, “I am twelve—or almost twelve, anyway.” She sat taller, but clearly didn’t think of herself as a woman yet. She got excited and rambled out, “Are you going to do magic for Anna and Mabel today? Can I come along?”
I moved to the counter to examine the offerings being prepared. “Not today, but when I meet them, I will show them a trick or two. Are their stables in the villa?”
The cook answered, “Mistress Viridia has stables in the merchant quarter along the eastern wall. Her trade caravan horses are stabled there.”
“Are you going to get all gross and stinky again, and is Mama going to have to clean you up again?” Clara asked, scrunching her nose. I winced as the cook narrowed her eyes at me in distrust. She was referring to when I unlocked my water affinity. The cook looked suspiciously at me and the girl, wanting an explanation.
“No. That was just a one-time thing. Your mother cared for me when I was very sick and near death,” I explained for the cook’s benefit. The cook seemed to relax a bit at the explanation, but it reminded me that I needed to visit Elaro for him to examine my core. I decided that would be my second stop today. I cut a thick slice of freshly baked bread and folded a ham steak into it. The cook didn’t stop me since she was preparing this feast for everyone at the party last night.
As I was leaving, a golden fig appeared in my palm, delighting Clara and surprising the cook. Even in a world of magic, such wonders still brought joy to children and astonished adults. As I exited the kitchen, the cook was slicing the fig for Clara.
I wandered toward the merchant quarter and, after asking some questions, found the teamster who operated Viridia’s stables. He would confirm with Viridia but assured me that a horse stabled here would be well cared for. Satisfied with his response and demeanor, I entered the city’s upper district.
Elaro’s manner was just as I remembered. The massive ironwood door looked the same, and so did the maroon flag of Milvanoris above it, depicting an eagle clutching a sword and an hourglass in its talons. I knocked firmly, and the door soon opened to reveal the young elf servant who immediately recognized me.
“Young mage, Elaro was aware you had returned to the city and was hoping you would visit,” he said with a slight bow.
I followed him inside, wondering whether it was Castile who had informed him or if he possessed some spies. Elaro was reading in his study and quickly set the book aside. The old elf rose energetically to greet me, “Mage Eryk! Good to see you well!” He embraced me with an elven greeting. “You can leave us,” he said to his servant.
When the door shut, I tried to satisfy my curiosity, “How did you know I was back?"
“When your companion died in Adrian’s Rest, I spoke with Castile. Two of my people and I have been scrying for her. I saw you arrive with the old warrior and the heavyset woman,” he said casually. He moved to pour us both some wine. “I’m sure Castile has already informed you of her progress. The techniques I taught her have enabled her to cast normally, although not as quickly as she was used to.”
I sipped the wine. “Thank you for helping her. She was in a wonderful mood last night and mentioned that her spellcraft has improved every day.” I was not about to tell Elaro that I had given Castile a stash of channeling essences. “I’m here for myself today, though. I want to pay you to analyze my aether core and see if it has healed.”
The elven healer broke into a grin, “I was hoping you would grant me the privilege. You are a most interesting subject, and if you are staying in Gramney, I still want to study you more thoroughly.”
“Maybe another time. We are still coming to terms with Lirkin’s death. You did mention that I would need supervision if I wanted to unlock another affinity,” I said, moderating my words.
Elaro scoffed, “Another? A fifteenth? It would be interesting to study, but I doubt you are stable enough.” He sighed, switching to Elvish. “Impetuous youth. Come, I will examine your core.”
I approached, and we both put our glasses down. I raised my shirt, and his cold hand rested over my heart. It quickly became warm. The feeling of being violated as he sent tendrils of aether into me was unpleasant, and I tried to resist but was unsuccessful. Elaro closed his eyes to focus, and I waited for minutes as tingles of cold, heat, and electricity played inside me.
He smiled as he removed his hand, and I lowered my shirt. “Remarkable. It is mostly healed, and you can safely expand your existing affinities. But the answer is no. Your core is much too small to take another. It looks like an angry child assembled it,” he chuckled.
“I understand. Will aether pool essences expand my core to unlock another affinity?” I picked up the wine and took a sip. It was far too acidic for me, but I pretended to enjoy it, assuming it had cost a fortune.
He nodded, “A two-fold increase should do it, raising your attribute by twenty points.” I winced. “With your convergence ability, it’s not out of reach, but it may take you a lifetime to acquire them.” He shook his head, “Focus on the affinities you do have, Eryk. Fourteen is a remarkable count for any mage.” I nodded, but I was not a mage—not yet.
“If I manage to achieve this feat, can I come to you for support when I unlock another affinity?” I asked.
“Of course! As long as you let me record the experience, it will be an interesting study to see whether you survive or not!” He laughed, and I understood it was Elvish humor—at least, I hoped it was. We talked a bit more about my travels. Even though I had been on the other continent, I hadn’t been near his homeland of Milvanoris, an Elven nation that had been destroyed and turned into a desert by humans.
We also discussed the aid he could provide the company. He had several of his people in Gramney, among them a few mages. He had already been relaying information to Castile, so I aimed to strengthen our relationship. We talked through the morning and into the early afternoon. I left him with two bundles of undried tea leaves from the Manticore Dungeon and a dozen golden figs for his experimentation. I didn’t reveal my alchemical recipe for the aether restorative, as I felt that it belonged to the goliaths. It was their dungeon to use as they wished, and if the valuable harvest inside was revealed to the world, it might attract more than just the Adventurer’s Guild.
I left the residence and planned to visit Ignis next, as I technically owned half of her smithy. My route brought me past Adrian’s Rest, and I paused because the boards had been removed and the windows opened to air it out. I walked to the door to find Benito on his hands and knees, trying to scrub weeks-old blood stains out of the wooden floor. He was drenched in sweat but managed a smile when he looked up.
From the back kitchen, I could hear Konstantin and Gilda arguing. “If you want me to work in this kitchen, it will need a significant upgrade,” Gilda bellowed. I had almost forgotten that the changeling had been a cook in the Legion. A good cook at that, but she was also a master poisoner—not the best combination for someone running an inn. I stood in the doorway as Konstantin took Gilda’s verbal jabs as she entered the kitchen.
From Lirkin, I learned that all cooks like to do things their own way. Lirkin was accustomed to using old pots, pans, and cauldrons. He mentioned they added flavor. Gilda wasn’t talking about replacing the cooking utensils but instead rearranging things in the kitchen and expanding the wood-fired stove. I watched in amusement as Konstantin listened, probably figuring out how much it would cost him to retain Gilda’s services. Although I doubted she would leave even if he didn’t acquiesce.
“So, Castile just handed you the inn?” I asked, drawing their attention to me. “Just want to remind you one of the rooms upstairs is mine in perpetuity.”
Konstantin grunted, “I’m not running a charity, Eryk. It’s one silver a night for your room to be held.” His serious expression softened slightly, revealing that he wasn’t entirely serious. My funds had bought most of the inn, and I was sure Castile would have informed him of the transaction.
“Are you sure you should be reopening so soon after…” I left the words hanging.
Konstantin replied sharply, “It is what Lirkin would have wanted, and you dedicated it to Adrian’s memory. It will reopen, and I dare anyone to cause trouble inside while I am here.”
His words had a lot of deeper meaning. Konstantin was still angry, and this was an act of defiance for him against the Empire’s intrusion. I still thought he would run the inn into the ground with his coarse attitude. “Fine. What do you need from me?”
Konstantin smirked, “Since you own half the inn with Castile and I’m just managing it, your contribution would be appreciated to help reopen it. Castile was still paying the staff even though they weren't working, so I hope to have them back tomorrow. Go talk to Blaze upstairs; he can tell you what we need.”
I turned around and saw the futility of Benito’s work. “Benito, go find a void mage to clean this up or purchase an alchemist’s cleaning solution. I’ll pay for it.” A relieved Benito nodded and hurried out of the room.
I climbed the stairs and found Blaze in the room that was reserved for me. Maps of the continent were tacked to the walls, and chalkboards were full of notes. Some of the writing was Castile’s, but most belonged to Blaze. Blaze looked at me and smiled, “Good to have you back. Sorry, I failed in protecting Lirkin.”
“Don’t shoulder the blame yourself, Blaze. Firth was always a pixie prick, and we will see justice served. What is this?” I indicated the walls.
“Notes Castile was collecting rumors, events, skirmishes, and political inclinations. It’s not everything; there’s a more complete room beneath Viridia’s villa. This,” he pointed out, “was preparation for Mateo, Benito, and me to go after Firth.” I nodded in understanding. He was plotting behind Castile’s back to seek revenge.
“Show me what you learned…”
I spent the next hour as Blaze guided me through the room layout and his notes. The information was organized into three categories: facts, information that was probably true but acquired as rumors, and rumors that were likely false—but you could not discount them out of hand, as there was always a thread of truth in them. They didn’t discard anything they learned; they simply archived it. When he reached the maps, they were in the process of identifying the most likely locations where Firth, Wylie, and his remaining Hound would be assigned in the shrinking Empire.
Most of their reliable facts came from Duchess Veronica Angella in Sobral City. She had not ventured forth from her province, but it had grown substantially in population in the last two years and began to become a trading hub. This meant a lot of merchants and nobles passed through regularly and dined with her.
“Linus is responsible for her Citadel guards,” Blaze concluded his extensive review of the boards. Linus, who had once served as the company medic, was injured before the Emperor's assassination. After the battle, he entered the service of the Duchess and became an informant for Castile. “We planned to head there and follow the trail to Firth. Given his failure here, we believe he will be assigned to patrol the southern border, where the goblins are strengthening their position. To our knowledge, he has not yet reported to his Centurian commander.”
I studied the wall for a moment before nodding. “When you’re ready to go, let me know,” I added, somewhat firmly, feeling guilty for not being there. “But we won’t go without informing Castile,” I added. I didn’t say we would need Castile’s permission, but I wasn’t going to leave without telling her. Blaze smiled and nodded. I spent the evening chatting with Blaze about lighter topics.
Blaze was mentoring Marius in swordsmanship and archery, but the boy favored the blade. Besides that, Bentio and he had been taking some short-term bodyguard assignments in the city at the Adventurer’s Guild for some extra coin. I left the inn late in the afternoon with one more stop planned for the day. I was off to visit Ignis’ forge.
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Comments
Thank you for the Elaro payoff. I was looking forward to that. However, I feel like it's missing a punch somehow... hmmm.. kind of feels like whispers of Eryk's exploits among the Orcs and Goliath should have reached such a well informed elf somehow... maybe Elaro says something Iike "I have heard some rumors about a tall human male doing x, y, and z... most would not know it is you, but you should know your exploits are getting some attention among some of my peers". Maybe that's too much, but it feels like Elaro could be Eryk's window into how elites across the world see things and how they communicate. And this meeting could open up that avenue for future Eryk.
Aspiring Sage
2025-09-03 10:14:19 +0000 UTCwill do something when I get to the edit of this chapter
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-21 16:35:10 +0000 UTCLirkin had shaked up with a widow and her children were working in the stables and kitchen of Adrian's Rest, correct? They seem to be absent. Either have her leave him earlier or add them in. I'd like to think the woman threw stuff when Mateo's woman gets cut.
Kevin
2025-05-20 20:40:53 +0000 UTCcorrected
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-18 23:00:26 +0000 UTCAlready done that twice
Sunto
2025-03-18 18:43:58 +0000 UTCmaybe, I am going to sort it out tomorrow. hitting some book 4 edits and writing a Town Builder today. Not sure if he wants Ignis in the dreamscape - dont think she has aether either
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-17 18:42:45 +0000 UTCAbout Ignis and the elven chainmail and Eryk learning to make it why not ask Ignis to add herself to the dreamscape amulet and Eryk can learn there?
SENLI
2025-03-17 18:41:19 +0000 UTChaha, no. the creatures have to be created by the dungeon with aether form the ley lines. that is why they are more likely to give an essence
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-17 18:06:05 +0000 UTCHe isn’t concerned about the price of eggs anymore. But now I am randomly wondering something. If Eryk brought a thousand chickens into a dungeon, would his collector allow him to harvest essences from them?
Andrew Crews
2025-03-17 17:27:22 +0000 UTC22 iirc
Enk
2025-03-17 09:57:21 +0000 UTCI don't think it's much of a concern for him since the escape from the empire. The price of the single medium-high value ess was hundreds of gold. That bag of channeling for Castile was worth something like 25000 gold coins. His focus has been on gaining knowledge, skills, training and protection. The forge, the inn, and castiles trade wars group with the orchard and others is more than sufficient to supply him with actual gold coins if he needs to do something. He can create massive amounts of wealth from nothing on less than a weeks notice essentially on demand.
Shandlar
2025-03-17 04:04:56 +0000 UTCi mean after what firths done it would be the pragmatic thing to do lol it cant be all honorable
Chachi
2025-03-17 00:18:45 +0000 UTCHow much fluid wealth does Eryk have atm? Splitting the coins from the chests in the Manticore dungeon was usually vague. He needs to improve the Inn's Kitchen, and then pay for stock for his education, general upkeep, etc. Is there a latest excel sheet available?
Silver Beard
2025-03-17 00:02:37 +0000 UTCThat's a book alright.... I didn't read it all, but for just posting you got a like.
Silver Beard
2025-03-16 23:57:57 +0000 UTCit's also a relatively low affinity. Teens as I recall. He would need to raise it into the 30-50 range for combat...and ofc an Aether pool to match.
Silver Beard
2025-03-16 23:57:20 +0000 UTCWhoops! I forgot. Darn. No super cool void lighting in the near future then.
Alias
2025-03-16 19:08:01 +0000 UTCI like the rewrite of the last few chapters and realize I really need to go back and reread the whole story from the beginning
Marten Byl
2025-03-16 18:04:32 +0000 UTCDamn, you have a bad pattern going on. Relax man. You're psycho. XD
Apophixas
2025-03-16 16:50:31 +0000 UTChe was hitting the help. dont remember if it was the barkeep or server. no kids
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-16 15:31:32 +0000 UTChe already has a void spell form - purify self - remove disease and posion from inside his body
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-16 15:27:35 +0000 UTCDoesn’t Eryk actually already have a decently high void attribute? Has he ever tried to find a spell form for void? While in the City, he could maybe sell some Aether potions or Figs to get some more upgrades like spell forms.
Alias
2025-03-16 13:54:09 +0000 UTCJust suggestions with some must fix grammar here and there: I woke in one of the guest rooms of the villa but didn’t quite remember getting myself here. [Why did I stop using purify self to eliminate the alcohol in my system? → Why had I stopped using Purify Self to clear the alcohol from my system?] I rolled out of bed in slow motion and pulsed my Healing and Purify Self spell forms to clear my head. I recalled that I had wanted to let go and enjoy the celebration, [challenging Konstantin and then Benito to a drinking contest. → first challenging Konstantin, then Benito, to a drinking contest.] My pounding head faded quickly, and I thought [I should have just cheated. → I really should have just cheated.] I walked to the door and began to orient myself in the small villa, making my way toward the smell of cooking food. The kitchen was immaculate, and a middle-aged woman [was seating as she kneaded dough. → sat kneading dough.] Cast iron skillets sizzled with meat and vegetables, and loaves of bread were already baking in the oven. A young girl was at the table, reading—or studying—a book. Both the cook and the girl turned to me. I recognized the girl with her thin blonde hair. “[Clara, you have grown into a beautiful woman, → Clara, you’ve grown into a beautiful young lady,]” I said, smiling at her. It had been a year and a half since I had seen her. I had been ordered to kill [and her brother and → her and her brother, but] instead, I had captured them in my dimensional space and eventually released them in Gramney with their mother, Viridia. The girl broke into a smile at the compliment. “[I am twelve, well, almost twelve. → I’m twelve—or almost twelve, anyway.]” She sat taller but clearly didn’t think of herself as a woman yet. She got excited and rambled, “[Are you going to do magic for Anna and Mabel today? Can I come along? → Are you going to show Anna and Mabel magic today? Can I come watch?]” I moved to the counter to examine the offerings being prepared. “[Maybe not today. But when I meet them, I will show them a trick or two. → Not today, but when I see them, I’ll show them a trick or two.] Are there stables in the villa?” The cook answered, “[Mistress Viridia has stables in the merchant quarter along the eastern wall. Her trade caravans stable there. → Mistress Viridia keeps her stables in the merchant quarter along the eastern wall, where she houses her trade caravans.]” “[Are you going to get all stinky again, and is Mama going to have to clean you up again? → Are you going to get all gross again so Mama has to clean you up?]” Clara asked, scrunching her nose. I winced as the cook narrowed her eyes at me in distrust. She was referring to when I had unlocked my water affinity. The cook looked suspiciously at me and the girl, clearly wanting an explanation. “[No. That was a one-time thing. → No, that was just a one-time thing.] Your mother watched after me when I was very sick and close to death,” I explained. The cook seemed to relax some at the explanation, but it reminded me that I needed to visit Elaro so he could examine my core. I decided that would be my second stop today. I cut a thick slice of freshly baked bread and folded a ham steak into it. The cook didn’t stop me, as she was preparing this feast for everyone at the party last night. As I was leaving, a golden fig appeared in my palm, delighting Clara and surprising the cook. Even in a world of magic, such displays still delighted children and surprised adults. [I left the kitchen as the cook cut up the fig for Clara. → As I walked out, the cook sliced the fig for Clara.] wandered toward the merchant quarter and, after some questions, found the teamster who ran Viridia’s stables. He [would confirm with Viridia but assured me I could stable a horse in the stables and that the mount would be well taken care of. → said he would check with Viridia, but assured me I could stable a horse there and that it would be well cared for.] Content with his answer, I wandered into the city’s upper district. Elaro’s manor was just as I remembered. The massive ironwood door looked the same, and so did the maroon flag of Milvanoris above it, depicting an eagle clutching a sword and an hourglass in its talons. I knocked firmly, and the door soon opened to reveal the young elf servant who immediately recognized me. “[Young mage, Elaro learned you had returned to the city and was hoping you would visit, → Young mage, Elaro was aware you had returned to the city and hoped you’d visit,]” he said with a slight bow. I followed him in but wondered [if it was Castile who informed him or if he had some spies. → whether Castile had informed him or if he had spies of his own.] Elaro was reading in his study and immediately put the book aside. The old elf rose energetically to greet me. “[Mage Eryk! → Mage Eryk, welcome!]” He embraced me in an elven greeting. “[You can leave us, → Leave us,]” he said to his servant. When the door shut, I sought to appease my curiosity. “[How did you know I returned? → How did you know I was back?]” “[When your companion died in Adrian’s Rest, I spoke with Castile. → After your companion died in Adrian’s Rest, I spoke with Castile.] Two of my people and I have been scrying for her. I saw you arrive with the old warrior and the overweight woman,” he said conversationally. He moved to pour us both some wine. “[I’m sure Castile has already told you of her progress. The techniques I taught her have allowed her to cast almost normally, albeit with not as much speed as she was used to. → I’m sure Castile has already spoken to you about her progress. The techniques I taught her allow her to cast nearly as well as before, just with less speed.]” I sipped the wine. “[Thank you for helping her. She was in a remarkable mood last night and told me her spellcraft has improved daily. → I appreciate your help. She was in high spirits last night and said her spellcraft is improving by the day.]” I was not about to tell Elaro that I had given Castile a cache of channeling essences. “[I am here for myself today, though. I would like to pay for you to analyze my aether core and see if it is healed. → But today, I’m here for myself. I’d like to pay you to analyze my aether core and see if it’s fully healed.]” The elven healer broke into a grin. “[I was hoping you would allow me the privilege. → I was hoping you’d give me the chance.] You are a most interesting subject, and if you are staying in Gramney, I still want to study you more thoroughly.” “Maybe another time. We are still [reconciling after learning of Lirkin’s death. → dealing with Lirkin’s death.] You did mention I would need to be supervised if I wanted to unlock another affinity,” I said, tempering my words. Elaro scoffed. “[Another? A fifteenth? → Another one? A fifteenth affinity?] It would make an interesting study, but I doubt you are stable enough.” He sighed, switching to Elvish. “[Impetuous youth. → Foolhardy youth.] Come, I will examine your core.” I approached, and we both put our glasses down. I raised my shirt, and his cold hand rested over my heart, quickly becoming warm. [The feeling of being violated as he sent tendrils of aether into me was unpleasant, and I tried to resist but was unsuccessful. → As he sent tendrils of aether into me, an unpleasant sense of intrusion washed over me. I instinctively tried to resist but failed.] Elaro closed his eyes to focus, and I waited for minutes as tingles of cold, heat, and electricity played inside me. He smiled as he removed his hand, and I lowered my shirt. “[Remarkable. It is mostly healed, and you can safely expand your existing affinities. → Remarkable. Your core is mostly healed, and you can safely expand your existing affinities.] But the answer is no. Your core is much too small to take another. [It looks like an angry child assembled it, → It still looks like it was haphazardly thrown together by an angry child,]” he chuckled. “[I understand. Will aether pool essences enlarge my core to unlock another affinity? → I understand. Could aether pool essences enlarge my core enough to unlock another affinity?]” I picked up the wine and sipped it. It was much too acidic for me, but I pretended to enjoy it because I assumed it cost a fortune. He nodded. “[A two-fold increase should do it, raising your attribute by twenty points. → You’d need to double your aether pool, raising your attribute by at least twenty points.]” I winced. “[With your convergence ability, it’s not out of reach, but it may take you a lifetime to acquire them. → With your convergence ability, it’s possible—but it could take you a lifetime to gather enough essences.]” He shook his head. “[Focus on the affinities you do have, Eryk. Fourteen is a remarkable count for any mage. → Focus on what you already have, Eryk. Fourteen affinities is an extraordinary number for any mage.]” I nodded, but I was not a mage. “[If I do achieve the feat, can I come to you to watch over me when I unlock another affinity? → If I manage it, can I come to you to oversee my next affinity unlock?]” I asked. “[Of course! As long as you let me record the experience, it will be an interesting study to see whether you survive or not! → Of course! As long as I can document it, I’d love to study whether or not you survive!]” He laughed, and I understood it was Elvish humor—[at least, I hoped it was Elvish humor. → or at least, I hoped it was.] We talked a little more about my travels. Even though I had been on the other continent, I hadn’t been near his homeland of Milvanoris, an Elven nation that had been destroyed and turned into a desert [but humans. → by humans.] We also discussed what aid he could provide us. He had several of his people in Gramney and a few mages among them. He had already been relaying information to Castile, so I wanted to strengthen the relationship. We talked through the morning and into the early afternoon. I left him with two bundles of undried tea leaves from the Manticore Dungeon and a dozen golden figs for his experimentation. [I didn’t reveal my alchemical recipe for the aether restorative as I felt that was the province of the goliaths. → I withheld my alchemical recipe for the aether restorative, believing that was the Goliaths’ domain to protect.] It was their dungeon to do with as they willed, and if the valuable harvest inside was revealed to the world, it might draw more than just the Adventurer’s Guild. I left the residence and planned to visit Ignis next, as I technically owed half of her smithy. My route [brought me past Adrian’s Rest, and I paused because the boards had been removed and the windows opened to air it out. → took me past Adrian’s Rest, where I paused—someone had removed the boards, and the windows were open to let fresh air in.] I walked to the door to find Benito on his hands and knees, trying to scrub weeks-old bloodstains out of the floor. From the back kitchen, I could hear Konstantin and Gilda arguing. “[If you want me to work in this kitchen, it’s going to need a significant upgrade, → If you expect me to work in this kitchen, you’ll need to upgrade it significantly,]” Gilda bellowed. I had almost forgotten that the changeling had been a cook in the Legion. A good cook at that, but she was also a master poisoner—not the best combination for someone running an inn. I stood in the doorway as Konstantin took Gilda’s verbal jabs while she went through the kitchen. From Lirkin, I had learned that all cooks liked to do things their own way. Lirkin was accustomed to using old pots, pans, and cauldrons, insisting they added flavor. Gilda, however, wasn’t talking about replacing cookware—she wanted to rearrange the entire kitchen and expand the wood-fired stove. I watched in amusement as Konstantin listened, probably calculating how much it would cost to retain Gilda’s services. Although I doubted she would leave even if he refused. “[Castile gave you the inn? → So Castile just handed you the inn?]” I asked, drawing their attention to me. “[Just want to remind you one of the rooms upstairs is mine in perpetuity. → Just a reminder—one of those rooms upstairs is mine. Permanently.]” Konstantin grunted. “[I am not running a charity, Eryk. One silver a night to hold your room. → I’m not running a charity, Eryk. One silver a night if you want to keep your room.]” His serious face cracked slightly, showing he wasn’t serious. My funds had purchased most of the inn, and I was certain Castile would have informed him. “[Are you sure you should be reopening so soon after… → You sure about reopening so soon after…]” I let the words hang in the air. Konstantin replied sharply, “[It is what Lirkin would have wanted, and you dedicated it to Adrian’s memory. It will reopen, and I dare anyone to cause trouble inside while I am here. → This is what Lirkin would have wanted, and you dedicated the place to Adrian’s memory. It’s reopening, and I dare anyone to start trouble while I’m here.]” His words carried deeper meaning. Konstantin was still angry, and this was an act of defiance against the Empire’s intrusion. I still thought he would run the inn into the ground with his coarse attitude. “[Fine. What do you need from me? → Fine. What do you need?]” Konstantin smirked. “[Since you own half the inn with Castile, and I am just running it, your coin would be appreciated to reopen it. → You and Castile own the place, and I’m just running it. So, if you want it reopened, your coin would be appreciated.] Castile was still paying the staff even though they weren’t working, so I hope to get them back tomorrow. Go talk to Blaze upstairs. He can tell you what we need.” I turned around and saw the futility of Benito’s work. “[Benito, go find a void mage to clean this up with an alchemist’s cleaning solution. I’ll pay for it. → Benito, stop wasting time. Find a void mage with some alchemist’s cleaning solution—I’ll cover it.]” A relieved Benito nodded and jogged out of the room. I climbed the stairs and found Blaze in the room that was reserved for me. Maps of the continent were tacked to the walls, and chalkboards were full of notes. Some of the writing was Castile’s, but most belonged to Blaze. He looked up and smiled. “[Good to have you back. Sorry, I failed in protecting Lirkin. → Good to see you back. I’m sorry I couldn’t protect Lirkin.]” “[Don’t blame yourself, Blaze. Firth was always a pixie prick, and we will see justice served. → Don’t put that on yourself, Blaze. Firth was always a conniving bastard, and we’ll get justice.] What is this?” I indicated the walls. “[Notes Castile was gathering rumors, events, skirmishes, and political inclinations. → Castile’s notes—rumors, events, skirmishes, political shifts.] It’s not everything; there’s a more complete room beneath Viridia’s villa. This,” he indicated, “[was preparation for Mateo, Benito, and me to go after Firth. → was our groundwork. Mateo, Benito, and I were going after Firth.]” I nodded in understanding. He was working behind Castile’s back to implement revenge. “[Show me what you learned… → Walk me through what you’ve got.]” I spent the next hour as Blaze guided me through the layout of the room and his notes. The information was organized into three categories: facts, [probably true but acquired as rumors, → likely true rumors,] and [rumors that were likely false. → dubious rumors.] They didn’t discard anything they learned; they simply archived it. When he reached the maps, they were in the process of identifying the most likely locations where Firth, Wylie, and his remaining Hound would be assigned in the shrinking Empire. Most of their reliable facts came from Duchess Veronica Angella in Sobral City. She had not ventured forth from her province, but it had grown substantially in the last two years and [began to become a trading hub. → had started transforming into a major trading hub.] This meant a lot of merchants and nobles passed through regularly. “[Linus is in charge of her Citadel guards, → Linus commands her Citadel guards,]” Blaze concluded his lengthy review of the boards. Linus, who had previously been the company medic, was injured prior to the Emperor’s assassination. After the battle, he entered the Duchess’s service. “[We were going to make our way there and follow the trail to Firth. → We planned to go there and follow the trail to Firth.] With his failure here, we think he will be assigned to patrol the southern border, where the goblins are fortifying their position. As far as we know, he has not yet reported to his Centurian commander.” I studied the wall for a while before nodding. “[When you are ready to go, let me know. → When you’re ready to move, let me know.]” I added, a little strongly as I felt guilt for not being here. “[But we do not go without telling Castile, → But we tell Castile first.]” I didn’t say we would need Castile’s permission, but I was not going to run off without informing her. Blaze smiled and nodded. I spent the evening talking with Blaze about less serious matters. Blaze was mentoring Marius in swordsmanship and archery, but the boy favored the blade. Besides that, [Bentio → Benito] and he had been taking some short-term bodyguard assignments in the city at the Adventurer’s Guild for some extra coin. I left the inn late in the afternoon with [more stop planned for the day. → one more stop planned for the day.] I was off to visit Ignis’ forge.
Andrew Crews
2025-03-16 06:14:09 +0000 UTChopefully eryk is ruthless with firth lowkey wish a torture element is introduced as a means to get info from firth or one of his pups.
Chachi
2025-03-16 04:43:19 +0000 UTCTo hunt Firth, I hope he gets wise and learns to wrangle Benito's mouth lol Oh and to get some cursory Hount training
NovaZero
2025-03-16 04:34:07 +0000 UTC"technically owed half of her smithy" > owned*
NovaZero
2025-03-16 04:25:22 +0000 UTCYeah that bit had me re-read that paragraph a few times
NovaZero
2025-03-16 04:22:55 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2025-03-16 04:21:48 +0000 UTCNice!!!
Doug
2025-03-16 04:02:55 +0000 UTCDidn’t Lirkin have a relationship with someone who worked at the inn? Kinda curious what happened to her.
Justin Barnett
2025-03-16 03:59:50 +0000 UTCExpanding this and last chapter flows a lot better
Doritoscrunch
2025-03-16 03:52:15 +0000 UTC"an Elven nation that had been destroyed and turned into a desert, but humans." I'm assuming it is supposed to be by humans.
Fred Fontenot
2025-03-16 03:35:45 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, i like this one a lot actually
Ulises
2025-03-16 03:31:03 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Mohammad Bakeer
2025-03-16 03:06:46 +0000 UTCone more chapter before we move into the second action arc of book 6...that means the others from Earth willl be introduced
Erick Thiemke
2025-03-16 03:02:28 +0000 UTC