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POV vote winner, second vote

Yeah, I got sidetracked by a Superbowl party. I have 243 half-written, and I am working to finish it now. Then, I'll move on to 244. I have to work on the missed Town Builder chapter tomorrow.

I have been editing book 4 and am reaching the part where he reveals that his burnt aether channels to Zyna. In terms of changing the narrative plot, healing aether channels is different from raising potential. It is canon that the only way for a normal person to raise potential is with apex essences (or at least that is what the MC was told). Since burned mages show a reduced aether channeling in potential on a tablet reader as the damage, that would mean only apex essences would help. But in terms of "healing" burnt channels, it is different. It takes approximately 100-110 minor essences for 1 point, 30-33 major essences for one point, and 3-4 apex essences for one point. So I will be editing the text to reflect that as I go and it will be in the discussion with Zyna.

So what would that mean for Castile who has lost 3 points of potential? We are going to assume it is 3.5ish since the tablet only shows round numbers. She would need between 10 and 14 apex essences to restore her channels.

Now, onto the POV vote! The mystery person from Earth won! So now we need to resolve some of that mystery. A group was portaled from Earth, so there will be multiple people, but only one will be featured. I am not sure where they are going to be pulled from yet...plane, train, bus or hotel (or post an idea in the comments). This interlude is coming up somewhat soon.

The MC has a hero-saving syndrome, so I am making it a female. Basically, whoever it is, is going to motivate the MC to figure out the World Gates to get them home (no the MC is happy in Desia). I am limited by how much text I can put in the poll choices, so here is a more descriptive choice:

Karina Krzykowska (30ish years old) - she is a tough woman who doesnt need saving. She has two daughters and a son on Earth she desperately wants to return to, though. She manifests a spell form that gives her incredible strength.

Lexi Morris - a young girl (10 ish years old) who only wants to go home to her family. She will have incredible potential in the illusion affinity

Teresa Cortes - (20ish years old) a college student who is engaged. She wants to return to her fiance. She has an incredibly deep aether pool and excellent Aether Shaping attributes

Evie Maguire - a young girl (10 ish years old) Lexi's friend. she will have a really high affinity for Necromancy

Anika Strauss - a middle-aged lawyer who has no strong affinities. she is an exceptional athlete and picks up the sword quickly. maybe an Olympian fencer

Comments

An idea could be that Eric’s nephew and his wife plus the shot gun baby end up being transported to his New World on the five year anniversary of his disappearance as they went to visit the spot where his car was last seen for remembrance. Their Affinities in the rare category could 25 and below. For his nephew he could have a high holy affinity, for the shot gun bride she could have high affinity in nature, and for the child’s high affinity could be whatever is needed for a high level beast tamer. Will be good motivation to get his family home.

Brett Ulakovic

Idk ? Bibidi babidi bu

michele 00

What is wrong with you

Khress

No homo 🗿

michele 00

I am okay with Karina if she says in a thick eastern European accent "Get Down. Give me 20."

Mark Corwin

I feel like the magical aptitude goes against the initial premise of the MC not having magical aptitude because he came from a magic void world, and his elemental affinities were gained through travel.

Brett

I want to be controversal and ask that you make the mc saves a man/boy. Variety is the spice of life

Khress

Ok, I am just joking)

Kenny

Then Eric gets together with Konstantin and they live happily ever after even though it is just transformed body of the female villaines

Kenny

Then eric finds her, but it turns out keeping her alive is the only way to open gate to earth back. Then she makes a deal with him and transforms to Konstantin, summons his soul back while her soul gets transferred to another body

Kenny

Then they get married, but Konstantin would be killed by that villaines and eric will go on revenge road

Kenny

And later on Eric will realise he is gay and have a thing for Konstantin

Kenny

In the end she will use necromancy shit on Konstantin, but something strange and wrong happens and he transforms to super undead vampire, becomes overpowered and will have unlimited lifespan

Kenny

Eric will then start thinking about letting Konstantin go from the party, but at the end will be saved by Konstantin when she will turn sides

Kenny

And she will have a thing for Konstantin, and he will be the only one suspecting her and she will use this situation to orcestrate an argument between Konstantin and erik

Kenny

Make the necromancy one please but make it so that the girl is older and super hot!!! And and and, make her have additional big attribute and that she hides necromancy from everyone and does good job of it. Make her master manipulator and major villaines who seems nice for a lot of chapters but turns out is human trash!!!!

Kenny

I mean it seems that the same amount of time since the Romans has passed in both worlds making the potential of time difference very low.

Owen Jones

I choose the little girl with necromancy talent because this might become a big plot point for protagonist. As we know necromancer is pretty much shunned everywhere, so the MC will need to overcome moral dilemma...like earlier in the chapter he has no qualm about killing the young orc...but, will he be able to do the same with the little girl since they are from the same world?

hasrul naim

a red truck

Thomas Shaw

Go birds 🦅

Kyle Cunnane

its gotta be a truck, obviously :)

Andrew Glass

I went with Teresa. If she has strong Aether shaping then maybe a STEM angle with her college background might help her with healing or some sort of physical affect of aether on the natural world - be it illusion or whatever. Plus, Teresa is older and though she is engaged, it might make for some fun banter with Raelia and maybe quick friends. Eryk's already rescued kids and I think you said this was gonna last a couple books and I can easily see it having a Last of Us kinda vibe for the overarching theme of returning home if it's a kid. Another avenue of thought is how Teresa Cortes is a Spanish name, which could provide another scene or two with Castile considering her heritage.

visigoth

A group pull, on vacation, that way you can get a variety of people, tourists, or on a cruise, If outlander all have high affinities, then all of them need to have some form of massive potential right???

Ivan Kanewske

Think you're right on that front, I'd prefer if it's not Teresa, would end up in romance once more, and I see it more likely the protagonist tries to get the child or mother back.

Sky Chicken

I think it would be funny if the character is pulled from somewhere awkward or sad, like on the toilet, in a birthday party, out skiing, while sky diving, on a holiday undergoing a break up, in the military (or combat) or while fishing in a rowboat.

Sky Chicken

Did the author take my last comment seriously? 🗿😂 Well, of these options the best are the 2 girls who are 10 years old, unfortunately I don't really like the idea of negromancy (the probable winning option 🥲), it would have been better another great affinity, in any case I hope it develops well.(Ps: you can't get both girls ? 😭)

michele 00

I went with Lexi. I like the idea of our protagonist having to protect a kid, so I was between Evie and Lexi but we've already done the "kid with necromancy" thing earlier on the way up to the orcs. I don't particularly think it needs to be rehashed. Also illusion could potentially offer her the ability to hide during combat and be less of a liability.

FranciscoDirect

So I think for the author to really try to write believe able interactions with a 10 year old girl would push them. Also necromancy for a 4th grader? Probably more intense than Halloween horror nights

MJ

I was kind of hoping the person from earth would be a relative of Eryk’s, but I like all these characters. Maybe the ones not chosen can join fortuna’s chosen and still get some screen time.

Justin Barnett

I like the Lawyer viewpoint idea, I always enjoy the average person story making their way through a world superhumans. They could have been a Japanese international lawyer traveling for business with a background in competitive Kendo. They end up defending the group while everyone gets their where about, Kendo people can do a lot of damage with little more then a stick!

Da Worst John

They would be the driving force behind the MCs' actions for books 7, 8, and 9. Whether they travel with the MC, will depend on how they develop and who is chosen. For instance, it would be hard to justify taking a 10-year-old into the Shimmering Labyrinth

Erick Thiemke

How big a part will this person play going forward.

John Donovan

the one with a fiancé... that's a loaded pit. We're all assuming a century hasn't passed when she gets back to find he married someone else and died in his sleep?!

Silver Beard

I want necromancy shenanigans. Castile would have someone to show the ropes to and possibly ourselves as well if the MC can get his mana shaping in order.

Wubwub

I chose one Erik will be able to help, develop. He's not a Mage yet so any Aether abilities will be wasted. Newly translated; remember nude in a barn? Their potential is meaningless without some combat ability.

Silver Beard

Definitely one of the kids to go full hero mode. I wonder if they'll take magic back with them

BubblyGhost

The one of the two young girls would be my choice, they would be like kid sisters to the MC instead of another love interest

William C

I think plane or in a building would be fun, something different from a train/bus/ or truck-kun.

SleepingNight

Oh no I want to choose 3 of them. Going to take a bit for me to decide which to vote for

TheAlreds90


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