A Soldiers Life 227 and 228 moved to book 4 collection
Added 2025-01-15 16:19:32 +0000 UTCI just finished with the World Sphere Book 1 edit. So, I am going to start my edit on A Soldier's Life Book 4 next week. I will read all the chapter comments before editing each chapter. Thank you in advance for your input. In terms of changes to expect: no plot changes. I am going to try to develop the relationship with the mage aspirants and Renna more. Hound training may get expanded by a few thousand words. The biggest change will be an attempt on the MCs life by First Citizen Borris Angella/Justin Cicero. This makes what happens to Borris in book 5 more palatable in my mind.
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Comments
the numbering got messed up, but there were still 4 chapters for Seraphim that week. so just not sure where the error started
Erick Thiemke
2025-01-17 22:31:25 +0000 UTCYou mentioned in your notes you are missing chapters. I my memory the only missing chapter is the one you missed when you were giving out the audio keys a week ago.
John Donovan
2025-01-17 17:53:59 +0000 UTCThanks good to know
Nick Pincus
2025-01-15 18:08:53 +0000 UTCI haven’t started the edit yet. It will be during Hound training though
Erick Thiemke
2025-01-15 18:01:49 +0000 UTCWhat chapter do the first citizens try to kill him in? Trying to know where I should reread
Nick Pincus
2025-01-15 17:24:45 +0000 UTC
