A Soldier's Life - 249 - Gnoll Party
Added 2024-08-22 05:13:13 +0000 UTCChapter 249: Gnoll Party
The gnolls' cackling language erupted from all around us. In Hound training, Hearne had told us this was an intimidation tactic by gnolls when they hunted. We didn’t have to wait long as a trio of large gnolls rushed the only wide opening. With just three enemies, I considered holding the pellets. Maveith’s bow twanged, and one of the gnoll shadows jerked from the impact of his heavy arrow and spun to the ground, accompanied by a piercing yip. I knew gnolls had excellent night sight. We were at a disadvantage in the low light of the blue moon and severely outnumbered.
I sent one last earth pulse, and then I slammed two sneezing and blindness pellets on the stones near the entrance. There was no wind tonight, so we shouldn’t have to deal with the spores blowing back on us.
The pellets shattered on the ground, and the air ignited their payload with a pop. A ten-foot-wide cloud burst in the moonlight. Since those four pellets had no smoke variants, we could still make out the gnoll shadows as they rushed us with their spears.
“Seven heartbeats before the spores become inert,” I warned Maveith about entering the cloud. “Five are about to scale the wall to our left. Can you handle the two remaining in front?”
“Easily,” Maveith rumbled as he released a second arrow into a confused gnoll coming through the cloud and tossed aside his bow to pull his hammer from the belt loop. The black spear appeared in my hands, extending my reach to strike the climbing gnolls. With a quick flick of the spear, the head of the first gnoll was separated from its body. Unexpectedly, the weight of the five gnolls scaling the wall affected its stability. The old stone base popped, and the ten-foot wall started falling slowly toward us.
“Maveith! Move right!” Maveith looked over and understood my urgency. I slapped Ginger’s flank, “Run!” She understood the command and bolted past Maveith, trampling the last blinded gnoll as she exited the structure, rushing into the night. It wasn’t ideal, but it would have taken too long to coax Ginger to move out of the corner in the confusion.
The ground shook as the stones making up the wall broke apart like shattered glass. The gnolls who rode the wall to the ground were stunned, and some appeared injured as they yipped in dismay. I took the opportunity to use the black spear to stab two of them in vital locations—the heart and head. Maveith’s hammer cracked a third’s head, and I heard him cursing the loss of his bow under the collapsed wall.
The gnolls were not done with us. We didn’t see the thrown spears in the moon's low light. One spear pierced Maveith’s abdomen, and he grunted in displeasure. My aether shield flashed, draining its charge as a spear targeting me was deflected. The flash of light from the shield blinded us for a moment.
I pulsed earth speak and detected five more gnolls rushing us. “Handle the last one in here,” I ordered Maveith, who was carefully pulling the spear out of his torso. If we stayed in the structure, they would be free to attack us from range with spears.
As I rushed the oncoming gnolls, I was worried for Ginger, but first, we needed to eliminate the gnolls. As I ran into the open, the temperature of the air suddenly dropped unnaturally. Gnoll mages were rarer than an ogre that didn’t reek. It appeared Fortuna was taking the night off from watching over me.
Frost appeared on the ground as I ran, but more deadly was the unnatural fog materializing around me and filling the woods and rising to the canopy. The gnoll shaman…mage…or whatever you called them was smart. The fog was thick and rising, and soon, the woods would descend into complete darkness, giving the advantage to the gnolls’ dark vision. Gnolls hunted at night but usually in packs no larger than six, and if I ever had a chance to talk with Hearne again, I was going to bitch about this encounter as it was far from what he had taught us.
Just before I clashed with the lead gnoll, I sent out an earth pulse and cursed. The flash image returned more than ten gnolls in range, some of which were half the size of the warriors. Focusing on my opponent, my air shield deflected a spear, and my spear tore out his guts. I pivoted and swung the black spear in an arc, slashing two more gnolls, one critically just below the neck. The remaining two uninjured gnolls backed off and defended instead of attacking.
I couldn’t waste time as the darkness was rapidly encroaching. I cut one of the spears in half in a quick exchange, as the black spear easily cut the shaft. These gnolls were strong but very unskilled with their weapons. The most experienced hunters in the pack would have attacked first, but they were now all dead. I pressed foward as I doubted it wouldn’t be long before I was in complete darkness.
I started to form an idea of what these gnolls were doing. These gnolls must be migrating their entire pack—maybe away from the war front. The distant gnolls were smaller, so likely younger, and running away from the combat, and their high numbers matched my conjecture.
Before I could engage the remaining gnolls, an unseen arrow pierced my thigh, and I struggled to remain standing. I grasped the arrow, and it snapped in my grasp and crumbled. I concluded it was an ice shard and not an arrow from the gnoll spellcaster nearby. I was hobbled and soon fending off the four resurgent gnolls as they got confident from my injury.
I wanted to pulse earth speak and search for the caster but couldn’t find the time to divert my attention from the fight as they attempted to surround me. Without my aether shield amulet available, one of these ice arrows strike me in a vital region. As I worked on healing, I shuffled to put my opponents between me and the mage’s likely direction.
The ice arrow had penetrated deeply, and it must have had a freezing effect tied to it, as the surrounding muscle was damaged as well. I pushed aether blindly toward the wound. When I was sufficiently healed, I surprised the gnolls, lunging on my bloody injured leg that I had been favoring.
I grunted in just mild pain as the wound was not quite healed. The spear pieced the surprised gnoll’s sternum. I extracted the tip at an angle, widening the wound and causing a spray of blood. The other young gnolls backed off in fear. They didn’t realize my vision was almost gone as darkness quickly descended. I broke away and raced toward the gnoll I suspected was casting spells. If I could eliminate him, I hoped it would break the gnoll's spirit and lift the darkness.
Unfortunately, my guess was correct as another unseen ice arrow pierced my chest. It had been too dark to see the attack, and I collapsed behind a tree, wheezing as cold blood filled my lungs. It hurt to breathe as I quickly and carefully worked the ice shard out to speed up the healing. As I healed the injury and spat congealed blood, I switched the spear for magebane to deal with the caster. The thick fog covered the canopy, and the darkness was almost complete. My earth pulse told me the gnolls were retreating, no longer interested in the fight.
I released a long breath of relief. If I had to continue the fight, I would have had to use a glowstone and be a marked target with attacks coming from the darkness. I focused my senses on listening to the woods. Maveith was still in the structure, but I didn’t hear signs of Ginger. After a few moments, I heard Maveith’s voice cut the night air fifty yards away. “Eryk, where are you?”
“Stay there, Maveith. I will come to you. The gnolls are retreating. They are a large migrating pack,” I yelled back. My chest injury had healed sufficiently for my breathing to return to normal. The metallic taste of blood lingered in my mouth, and I kept spitting to clear it.
The gnolls were fleeing, already out of the range of my pulses, and my aether core was pretty depleted. I was content with letting them retreat as the darkness was not receding.
As my adrenaline-fueled racing heart calmed, I spent time recharging the aether shield amulet and then stood from my cover. I moved back toward Maveith, but no attack was forthcoming. In the light of a glowstone, Maveith was leaning against the wall, his abdominal wound mostly healed. “Do you need more of the orc healing potions?”
“My mouth may never recover if I consume another,” Maveith whined in good humor. “I have just some lingering soreness, but will be fine. Where is a Ginger?” His tone had changed to concern.
I listened to the quiet night and didn’t hear anything. “I will go look for her with earth speak. She probably didn’t wander far away.” I replied with hope.
“I will go with you,” Maveith stated, not taking a no for an answer. I didn’t object, and we moved into the dark woods. I pulsed infrequently to conserve aether and wondered why the dense fog overhead hadn’t dissipated with the departure of the gnoll spellcaster and his band. Maybe it was because there was no wind tonight. We were forced to use a glowstone to light our way.
A pained equine cry cut the night a distance away. Maveith was already lumbering ahead to Ginger’s rescue. If it was strange to put our lives in danger for a horse, neither of us mentioned it. I paced myself with Maveith, holding the glowstone and magebane. The horse’s second cry had us both entering into a sprint. My earth pulses increased in frequency as we closed on the combat.
I got some rough feedback on what was happening. One of the gnolls had roped Ginger and secured her to a tree. She was fighting back as they tried to take her down with spears. “They are killing her!” I snarled as I began to outpace Maveith.
Maveith’s war cry echoed the night behind me, drawing the gnoll’s attention away from Ginger. I reached them first and slashed into the nearest gnoll after deflecting his spear with magebane while tossing the glowstone on the ground to light the area. My second slash was to free Ginger, who was bleeding from multiple stab wounds. Instead of running, she reared and came down on a gnoll, crushing its skull in retribution.
I only detected six gnolls in the clearing, and one was dead, and one was wounded. Maveith’s hammer crushed a third, and then things went dark. I guessed a gnoll had covered the glowstone, so I produced another, but its light only lasted a few breaths before being snuffed out like a candle. Maveith was blinded as well. “I can’t see,” his deep-winded voice echoed nearby.
I pulsed earth speak again, and the three young gnolls grouped together. Their cackling language echoed in the woods, and I guessed our loss of sight was due to the gnoll mage somehow. More cackling conversations occurred around us deeper in the woods, and it angered me. Ginger was huffing angrily nearby and bleeding as I tried to call her to me, “Ginger! Come! Apple!”
It didn’t work, as she was also blind and heavily injured, but at least her training kept her from running from the battle. A thud sounded, and Maveith grunted, “An arrow has struck me.”
“Is it an ice shard?” I asked as I continued to pulse earth speak to fight the fog of war. I was now fairly certain which of the distant gnolls was the caster.
“Yes,” Maveith’s voice returned angrily as I heard ice crunching in his grasp.
“I am going to rush the caster. He only has two guards.” I informed Maveith. Not being able to see in the dark was becoming an annoyance. I was so accustomed to the night vision goggles of the Hounds that losing that ability was needling me. Perhaps I should have searched the Archives for Hound gear or tried to locate more Hound caches in the Western Empire.
As I raced toward the trio of gnolls, my aether shield flashed as an ice shard shattered on the defensive magic. The flash and confusion allowed me to close, and the gnoll guards interposed themselves to protect their caster. I had overestimated myself. In the dark, I took a spear to the shoulder and one to the chest and had to step back and recover. It was too hard to fight in the dark, even with earth pulses, when my opponents could see and I could not. I could tell their general location and their rough movements, but their bodies were not clear enough to defend myself from their attacks.
I retrieved the blindness pellets and cast them into the ground, but I knew they were prepared for the trick from the cackling warning from the mage. I started to retreat, backstepping toward Maveith and Ginger, and produced my third glowstone. It too soon winked out, and I shoved it agitatedly into my pouch as my aether wouldn’t charge it. I only had one glowstone left in my dimensional space.
The two gnolls with spears were now getting bolder, stalking me as I retreated. I had stopped the bleeding from the spear wound, but defending against the mage and his guards was too difficult if I couldn’t see. My aether was dangerously low as well from the night’s combat. Fuck, I swore to myself, I needed to see in the dark. And then I could.
I was stunned as my vision suddenly crystallized. My vision was like twilight, heavy in gray coloring, but high in contrast. I understood what had happened. I had just imprinted a spell form to see in the dark. I was channeling aether into the new spell form on the aether core, and it was affecting my eyes, similar to the Hound goggles.
My vision was only clear to about twenty-five feet, but that was good enough to handle the overconfident gnolls. A grin slowly formed on my lips, and the gnolls sensed the change in my demeanor. Before they could back away, I rushed the pair.
They didn’t stand a chance as their brains were still processing my change in confidence. Magebane made short work of the pair, and I chased down the fleeing mage after his guards fell. The mage tried to flee, necklaces of bone rattling as he stumbled away in fear. I cut him down from behind and realized he looked ancient for a gnoll. I pulsed earth speak, but no more gnolls were in range.
There were still more gnolls out there, but they were mostly females and pups, and unlikely to bother us. I returned to Maveith, who was still in the dark but guarding Ginger with the remaining gnolls all dead. “It's over, Maveith; the caster is dead.” I produced the last glowstone to shed light on us. Maveith blinked until his vision cleared. My eyes didn’t need to adjust to the light until I dropped my new spell form.
I hadn’t planned to hunt down the remaining gnolls, but after seeing Ginger’s wounds in the light, I changed my mind as my anger surged.
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Comments
Eryk still has the night vision potion right?
Bagel bit me
2025-06-28 22:04:26 +0000 UTCmissing word?: Without my aether shield amulet available, one of these ice arrows (could) strike me in a vital region.
cluelets
2025-06-13 06:53:20 +0000 UTCcorrected
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:23:12 +0000 UTCcorrected
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:22:09 +0000 UTCcorrected
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:22:05 +0000 UTCcorrected
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:21:02 +0000 UTCspeed of healing would be the result of how much aether he uses at once
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:20:24 +0000 UTCin a book 4 edit, he studied the runes on teh night vision goggles
Erick Thiemke
2025-05-13 21:19:30 +0000 UTCOk this chapter is great but I would say giving us hints throughout the series of spell forms on devices people use can be imprinted in moments of crisis would have been really good. I always knew a spell form can be imprinted during duress if a mage has studied it. But in this instance I think we need a bit of build to this. Maybe even a flash back of Eryk talking to someone a mage about how spell forms work and then him imprinting it. As a reader this can definitely be reworked
Fast Lance
2025-05-07 14:10:54 +0000 UTCI understand that makes can imprint spell forms in crisis. But this was a little too perfect. One of the things I loved most about this series; yes the MC has some awesome powers and uses them in unique ways. But he is not invincible. Having magic powers bestowed upon him at the exact moment he needs them. It just seems like lazy writing. And you are much better then that.
Jason Pierce
2025-05-05 20:13:15 +0000 UTCThere is something wrong here with the injury and healing. "Sufficiently healed, I surprised the gnolls, lunging on my bloody injured leg that I had been favoring. I had poured aether into my healing spell form and grunted in just mild pain as the spear pieced the surprised gnoll’s sternum." Also isn't his healing getting a lot stronger recently? By now it's some super healing curing several severe injuries.
Cypha
2025-04-24 07:11:59 +0000 UTCI am guessing that the new spell is from the illusion affinity? How will he ever work out which affinity it is actually from?
Space Cadet
2025-04-02 19:55:51 +0000 UTCThanks for the great chapter, good fight, makes a difference when you can't see what you're doing! Especially when Earth Sense isn't a detailed view, and spears/ice etc in the air would not be 'seen'!
Brianna Stormcloud
2025-04-01 01:35:00 +0000 UTCThe mage tried to flee, necklaces of bone rattling as he stumbled away in *hear. The mage tried to flee, necklaces of bone rattling as he stumbled away in fear.
Andrew Crews
2025-02-27 06:43:29 +0000 UTCThe black spear appeared in my hands to give me reach to * climbing gnolls. The black spear materialized in my hands, extending my reach to strike at the climbing gnolls.
Andrew Crews
2025-02-27 06:41:56 +0000 UTCHis space is 11.5 foot cubed area. If he emptied enough of the unnecessary junk, he'd ABSOLUTELY have space for Ginger. If he emptied out his entire space, he'd have room for like 6 standing gingers with the right positioning if hes able to manipulate how they're oriented. Hell, if he managed to get more space essence and got his cube to 12 feet squared, he could fit 7 even.
Apophixas
2025-01-20 02:44:11 +0000 UTCIchigo - there were two rewrites to the chapter (3 versions total) - I left all three versions up so readers could see the process.
Erick Thiemke
2024-12-15 04:35:15 +0000 UTCI could’ve sworn Eryk stored the 2 legionnaires that were with the mage making the total people 6 and not 3-4
Ichigo Kurosaki
2024-12-15 04:32:04 +0000 UTCStill, this seemed a bit out of the blue. Perhaps a comment about under duress spell forms can manifest based on a certain affinity? Or have him put some time towards the spell form in a previous chapter in editing?also please don’t make the main character too cold-blooded…as you mentioned before it’s the balance of practical but also a good person…too killer and it doesn’t work
Eli Davis
2024-10-18 18:51:17 +0000 UTCThe black spear appeared in my hands to give me reach to climbing gnolls. …reach to ‘the’ climbing gnolls.
Jordan
2024-10-18 01:37:40 +0000 UTCyes one spot per affinity. he can no longer learn an illusion spell form to imprint. Renna learned flight this way if you remember
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-24 20:42:26 +0000 UTCOk so spell forms with passive effects can be learnt by those who have got the requirements in moments of need without their willing effort but these spellforms still occupy the only spot available right?
Deliver roo
2024-08-24 20:34:53 +0000 UTCTime to play tetris with his storage. Also he should he either sell his kill creature body parts some are rare like dragon head and brain, while other should be thrown away. But yes reorganize is key.
momo2009
2024-08-23 15:29:22 +0000 UTCYep, the end was kinda not Eryk since the dude is experienced in fighting , has aether recovery potion, has posion, stink old expired potion, etc. The only way the fight make sense is the gnoll had a 2nd mage that weaken his strength or cause him to act out of character. But anyway if the author keep it, Eryk need to make more friend with long range magic or a healer. The two of them still need more practice as a team. And ginger need essence to be more of a badass.
momo2009
2024-08-23 15:20:35 +0000 UTCAgreeing. By adding the horse to his party, and by starting out on a journey where he can't rely on being able to stop regularly at way stations for resupply, outfitting, his "tons of supplies" requirement went way, way up, competing with the space available for Ginger.
sdf
2024-08-23 14:30:47 +0000 UTCBro what the hell are you talking about
Nick Nicholson
2024-08-23 02:40:49 +0000 UTCThe gnoll mage hit him multiple times and also “I took a spear to the shoulder and one to the chest and had to step back to recover.” So it wasn’t just the mage that hit him. Keep in mind this is Eryk we are talking about, who has pretty damn high stats, and is a better melee fighter than Konstantin. Plus he has his spell forms. Yet he got badly injured in a melee fight by untrained gnolls. During the first orc fight, there were multiple times he blocked arrows he barely had any time to react to with this air shield. I’m not saying this should have been an easy fight, but the fact he had his lung pierced, got hit in the leg artery, and got speared in the shoulder and chest is just wild. Not to mention a few gnolls got away. If he didn’t have his healing spell form or potions, he would have died here. Honestly I wouldn’t be complaining about this whole thing if it was just the mage that injured him, cause I can somewhat understand that. But when I got towards the end of the chapter and he got speared in the shoulder and then chest when they were saving ginger, that’s what mainly bothered me. He’s way too good of a melee fighter to be getting injured by untrained gnolls, whether in the dark or not.
Thresher
2024-08-23 02:15:17 +0000 UTCA warhorse is built more along the lines of a Clydesdale than a quarter horse or thoroughbred. They eat a lot, or they graze a lot and then eat a lot. If he brought a horse along with him, presumably a lot of his space would be filled with oats, barley, molasses, provisions. She can travel fast, in short bursts, but she can't live off the land, hunt for her own food. Also, realistically, he should be spending time at start and close of any day checking her hooves, making certain (if she was shod) that she hadn't thrown a shoe, brushing her down, making sure she had a blanket so she didn't catch a cold, making hot chocolate for her with little marshmallows, ... horses are work ;/
sdf
2024-08-23 02:09:25 +0000 UTCI agree on Maveith who seems almost comical in this chapter saing he can handle three gnolls easilly ending up pierced after disposing of one. I believe he killed 3 gnolls in the end, considering that Ginger, which is a horse, killed 2 it is not a great result for someone experienced who has been given dozens of essences by Eryk. The MC fought well for someone that can only see the position and general movement of enemies in the dark and I would say it is almost a miracle that only the mage menaged to hit him. Maybe the difficulty would have been more apparent if he was using his armor to repel grazing strikes instead of reling solely on aether and air shields, but I agree with the readers saing that a fight in the dark is another matter entirelly compared with previous encounters.
Deliver roo
2024-08-23 01:56:45 +0000 UTCHe learned his first spell form to suck essence dry by accident when he took his first essence. This night vision was kind of the same thing. He had used the artifices goggles for months so knew what he wanted and maybe ‘felt’ the spell forms a bit. But this was not an option among the spell forms for illusion so he wasn’t aware of it
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-23 01:35:15 +0000 UTCMaybe there could be an addition of Eryk’s efforts to learn the spellform for low-light vision in previous chapters, also considering the fact that it could be mistaken for the darkvision of D&D but apparently it is different. I like the MC being competent and strong at this point in the story but I admit I did’t get that he was actually studing this particular illusion spellform. In fact, I remember him considering far more interesting choices when he read about illusion spellforms and nothing after that, but I could easilly be wrong.
Deliver roo
2024-08-23 01:05:26 +0000 UTCHe had already been studying the different imprints he could get, and it makes sense that during a time of stress it would slide into place since he badly needed it. You only get one free imprint with each school you can do, everything else is casting and the MC is far from being able to learn to be a caster... yet. I think the general rule has also been, the higher the affinity and the greater the need, the more likely a spell will slide into place when a character is concentrating on a action.
Quasimotolovesbells
2024-08-22 20:26:58 +0000 UTCEryk has been shown to pulse Earth speak dozens of times despite his low aether reserves. Maveith is an experienced hunter who has also traveled extensively and has fought beside Eryk many times, so I highly doubt he wouldn’t have been in similar situations such as this before and he should know who to react and fight in the dark. Eryk has fought mages before, and quite literally captured a first citizen water mage who was INVISIBLE at the time. So he’s already fought and won against a mage he couldn’t see before, not to mention that I am confident a first citizen water mage is more powerful than a random gnoll mage. Plus she had two legionaries with her at the time and Eryk was alone. I’m not saying this fight shouldn’t have been difficult, I’m just saying there is no way he should have gotten hit and stabbed as much as he, Maveith and ginger did. Plus a bunch of the gnolls got away. My point is that the MC and Maveith are both very experienced fighters, and have fought in similar situations before. Yes it should have been difficult because it was a surprise attack and at night, but they shouldn’t have gotten their asses kicked as badly as they did.
Thresher
2024-08-22 19:27:54 +0000 UTCPeople can be stored like bricks. I believe 3 of the 4 people stored were lying down and I imagine their arms/legs weren’t splayed out making storing them difficult (the mom and mage were tied up and lying down I believe). A horse, not so much unless he gets ginger to sit down, tuck her legs under her, or something similar. Definitely possible to make storing Ginger easier, but “nonsense” is a bit unreasonable.
Jordan
2024-08-22 19:14:00 +0000 UTCThis was a very dynamic fight with lots of factors that made it a unique and difficult fight. Essentially a surprise attack with no time to think through a solid plan (he had time for this with 1 of the 2 nine man pathfinder squads), low to no visibility (huge problem that could kill him on its own. The equivalent of sonar is not a strong counter as he has significant aether limitations. Maveith also does not have that capability limiting his usefulness to some degree), enemy mage he can’t quickly/effectively counter or react to since he can’t see well, significant numbers disadvantage, etc. it’s hard to react quickly to all of these factors no matter how good someone is. I think many are being overly critical of this chapter.
Jordan
2024-08-22 18:48:44 +0000 UTCI agree with point 1. Point 2 is nonsense. If he can store a group of people and tons of supplies he can store a horse.
Nick Nicholson
2024-08-22 18:47:26 +0000 UTCThe answer to this question will depend on what point of the conflict you are asking about. I’m assuming you’re talking about the beginning so my response reflects that. 2 things. 1. Storing Ginger would bottom out his aether and he needs that to fight so many opponents. 2. His dimensional space might not contain a large enough space yet to hold her. My understanding of where things currently stand is that he needs to get rid of stuff and reorganize his space to fit such a large creature. With general horse measurements I’m not even sure a horse would fit due to the dimensional space’s current dimensions, but there is a lot of variability in horse size in general.
Jordan Alvey
2024-08-22 18:38:01 +0000 UTCOkay, but Eryk need to start giving her essence to actually become stronger or to develop magic.
momo2009
2024-08-22 18:18:40 +0000 UTCWell to be fair his training as a hound was slim down due to time constraints. But still for me beating the gnoll should had been easy due to how many item he had on hand. Drop items from above, oil to start fire, storage removal to make a moat, air shield to trip people. And Mavieth an him should had been more in sync since they fought together in the dangerous dungeon. Plus mavieth would unlikely to die from a gnoll small weapon since he twice the size of a normal person.After this fight Eryk need a long range fight member and a healer if possible. Mavieth the tank and Eryk is the Rouge.
momo2009
2024-08-22 18:17:06 +0000 UTCIs there a reason he didn’t just store Ginger in his dimensional space?
Nick Nicholson
2024-08-22 17:56:04 +0000 UTCI know he’s not infallible and he cannot control their actions. I just thought he had graduated from getting beat by low level monsters after all he’s been through, especially with hound training which I thought would have prepared him for situations like this. Even if he doesn’t have his night vision goggles, I would have thought they’d train them how to operate at night even if they lost or damaged them.
Thresher
2024-08-22 17:43:52 +0000 UTCGinger getting a rope around her neck would not have been difficult. the fact she it still standing is a testament to her battle prowess.
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 16:28:49 +0000 UTChe was op as soon as he got his dimensional space. he has made incremental steps toward being competent
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 16:26:19 +0000 UTCTypo: Remove quotation mark before /“Maveith was already lumbering /
Tetsu-nii
2024-08-22 15:30:12 +0000 UTCTypo: /none of the gnolls were not interested/ delete the "not"
Tetsu-nii
2024-08-22 15:27:18 +0000 UTCyeah i have been writing pretty late and not sleeping much. i hope that Grammarly gets most and the readers the rest
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 14:38:19 +0000 UTChe almost died against the orcs and was able to take them in small groups. combat is about the unexpected - the wall collapsing...the gnoll mage...the darkness....having to save Ginger. he is not infallible in combat and cannot control his enemies actions
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 14:37:35 +0000 UTCit is low-light vision. not dark vision - range is determined by affinity in illusion magic
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 14:35:02 +0000 UTCHe has 4 glowstone should had chuck it out since it would strengthen his vision and weaken the gnoll. Like I said he should had looted the archive of all glowstone and burned the 2nd dead hound body. 😀
momo2009
2024-08-22 13:28:25 +0000 UTCSomething is off with the fight. Eryk should had been smarter, horse more aggressive since she has survived a fight with a worst monster and mavieth should had been more powerful do to ring and experience. Maybe add a second gnoll mage who mess with Erky corridnation or mind since it has been a weakness before. Like the fight but still feel off. Love the news spell form and more explanation on how random magic can be learn would be great. Yeah looting for hound gear should be a priority #2 since magic eyes require aether and he doesn't have much.
momo2009
2024-08-22 13:25:42 +0000 UTCI don't like this solution where the MC gains a new power so easily and conveniently. It makes it seem like all the effort he spent trying to learn the other spell forms: earth speech and healing, were a waste of time. Personally, I think these new powers are starting to make the character a bit unbalanced and leaning too much towards OP. I don't like overly OP characters. One of the appeals of the story for me is the fact that the MC gets out of several problems with few resources.
Lemes
2024-08-22 12:58:24 +0000 UTCGuess have to see if Ginger can choke down the orc potions...that or put her in stasis?
Silver Beard
2024-08-22 10:49:39 +0000 UTCHe doesn't need to see with earthspeak
visigoth
2024-08-22 10:28:44 +0000 UTCAll those battles were during daytime or with the use of night vision goggles. The moon was very dim too. None of the 3 have dark vision. He has a orcbane and mage bane. Which causes debilitating pain and prevents mana channeling respectively. The amulet only has the one charge. His earthquake doesn't work for projectiles. So the gnolls used their night sight advantage, and peppered them from a distance to weaken them. His earthsense is only a snapshot, and against so many moving targets it's incredibly difficult to make that useful. If he could see I agree it would be a different story. Maybe he could have used his glowstones, but I don't think he has any night forest fighting experience. Therefore it's understandable why he fights at such a disadvantage. Hopefully he will have time to use the dreamscape amulet to practice this night fight and seak out other ways to practice difficult conditions so he won't be caught unaware again.
steve H
2024-08-22 08:54:34 +0000 UTCThey really went and awakened his inner John Wick with what they did to Ginger.
Gwalmeich
2024-08-22 08:33:07 +0000 UTCMy expectations are that we are now 5 books into the series, and our mc is still struggling against gnolls. He’s fought in battles, sparred against some of the best swordsmen in the legion, killed two groups of orc pathfinders, killed an extremely powerful summoner, and fought all manner of powerful beasts and monsters, and yet somehow he gets his ass handed to him by a pack of gnolls? Circumstances aside, he’s been in arguably worse situations when he was less experienced and yet came out less battered than in this fight. Sorry if I sound a little butthurt here, but I’d like to see the mc have a consistent level of strength and competence. He’s come so far and grown so much, that it pains me to see him getting punked by a pack of bottom tier monsters.
Thresher
2024-08-22 07:15:28 +0000 UTClike I can barely walk around my house ive lived in for 20 years in the dark, he's running through a forest hes never been in and fighting people. it's common sense man
Zurko
2024-08-22 06:46:44 +0000 UTCbro he actually can't see. how you gonna win a fight with super fast swinging weapons and flying spells from a large group when YOU CANT SEE. your expectations are way to high bro.
Zurko
2024-08-22 06:44:25 +0000 UTCTftc
Eriach
2024-08-22 06:41:45 +0000 UTCIs the spell just night vision, or is it more a vision that penetrates what's hidden? Like seeing through illusions, for example.
ElFitz
2024-08-22 06:20:18 +0000 UTCI’d be willing to buy that explanation, if not for the fact that on two occasions, Eryk has won a 1v9 against orc pathfinders, who should in all accounts be more formidable than gnolls. In this encounter, it is 3v13 possibly 14. Maveith is a formidable fighter, and Ginger can take out a gnoll or two on her own. In all honesty Eryk should be able to 1v14 this pack at this point in the story if it was daytime. At least if we base his strength off of his previous fights, which is logical. Not only that but now he also has the aether amulet and more experience than when he fought the first group of pathfinders. Plus he has allies. I understand conditions weren’t in his favor since it was nighttime and they ambushed, but there is no way I’ll believe that he got beat as hard as he did in this situation.
Thresher
2024-08-22 06:15:11 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter, Great Fight, awesome new spell!!
1536539
2024-08-22 05:54:23 +0000 UTCThere's a reason why in D&D, when you're setting up encounters, you multiply the difficulty by a number that scales with, not directly but linearly, the number of enemies in the encounter. The numbers advantage is super powerful, and pac tactics can make a small group of wolves take down a pretty well-seasoned set of adventurers.
rizen
2024-08-22 05:49:43 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2024-08-22 05:48:23 +0000 UTCTricky fight. For the first time in awhile it did feel like there was some jeopardy, which was good. Fair few spelling mistakes/extra words in there. Probably needs a second editing pass when you get the time.
Blorcyn
2024-08-22 05:30:05 +0000 UTCKind of odd how much he struggled against some gnolls. I get that the conditions were different, but he did much better against orc pathfinders, who you’d think would be stronger and more coordinated than gnolls. Not only that but he had Maveith and Ginger with him, which should have alleviated his struggles. I understand this was most likely set up for him to imprint that spell form, but still. He should be even stronger and more experienced than when he fought his first group of orc pathfinders, plus he had 2 Allies with him, and yet he struggled so much and didn’t even kill all the gnolls. Thanks for the chapter, sorry for complaining I just don’t like seeing my fav characters (Maveith and Ginger) get injured.
Thresher
2024-08-22 05:27:55 +0000 UTCPoor Ginger
Jo
2024-08-22 05:19:12 +0000 UTC4th of 4 for last week. Trying to make the combat balanced. The spell form is on his Illusion Affinty - 13, 20 feet at 10, 40 feet distance at 20....so guessed it around 25 feet currently
Erick Thiemke
2024-08-22 05:13:30 +0000 UTC