Peak Performance 2 Full Comic!
Added 2024-08-06 01:30:06 +0000 UTCIt's DOOOONE!
41 pages! 175 renders made, I think maybe 10 or so haven't been used so there's still some meat on the bone of the unedited render release which I will post tomorrow.
I hope you guys like this. There's something that I tried to do with this comic that I haven't done before, which is include a character arc where Marcella comes in as a certain type of person and leaves as another. I have a few criticisms, but then I guess anyone who makes anything is their own worst critic, so I'm gonna keep those to myself.
That said I am very interested in YOUR feedback! The goal here was to create the foundation of an actual storyline. To do some character writing. To differentiate the girls from each other. I think I did all of those things. To which extent I succeeded is for you to judge.
This is something I wanna get better at, but for now it's time for a break from story content. The rest of August will be solely dedicated to smut, smut, smut! Stay tuned :D
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Comments
You wrote once that you're not into leather/latex, but I sure am glad you're using it anyway - it looks amazing!
Matt
2024-09-30 10:31:41 +0000 UTCsmut smut smut!!!! sounds great
LGAR 2
2024-08-07 23:37:53 +0000 UTCEpic =) thanks!!
Wolfie
2024-08-07 22:39:43 +0000 UTCrenders are up :D
TheDude3DX
2024-08-07 15:04:40 +0000 UTCYeah you basically have it :D Except there's a bit more to Marcella than that. I should work that into a story format too, make it all make sense.
TheDude3DX
2024-08-06 23:16:33 +0000 UTCcomic was great, i hope you do a futa on futa one next
frank
2024-08-06 17:31:08 +0000 UTCrenders please no comic =) awesome work!!
Wolfie
2024-08-06 12:39:48 +0000 UTCOK, reading the whole thing, took a while and to go back to make sure I understood the first time, I see now. Zenith turn ordinary girls into the Bimbo type, like Nikki and Jess, but can go further with a dickgirl, if I read it right engineer the bimbos so the dickgirls fit their anatomy, pussy and arse (sorry that's a British arse not an American Ass...LOL). Mercella shows up freshly turned into a dickgirl from a bimbo , full of self doubt and inhibitions then after a good ego boost is happy with herself and who she really is, maybe even an Alpha |Dickgirl and who could blame her. I like the sense of humour too, the joke she made about saying dumb shit, very self deprecating humour, very English humour actually....you sure she's not a former English rose? Now that would be a story wouldn't it? Take a sweet English rose and turn her into a ravishing dominant dickgirl, WOW....anyway great work as ever, glad I've got a grip on it too now, will make the following make more sense. Although as you say always look forward to smut, smut and dickgirl porn, I just love the girls tities and super sexy legs always in heels....rule 1 ALWAYS in heels, rule 2, see rule 1.
Eppytaff
2024-08-06 10:35:10 +0000 UTC
