Marcella Santiago: Peak Performance first 12 pages done!
Added 2023-06-18 21:45:07 +0000 UTCThere you go! 20 minutes before midnight, GMT +1, so as far as I'm concerned that means I released it in the weekend, given I still have Great Britain, Portugal, and the entire American continent behind me :P
Again, got in my own way with re-editing pages, churning out new renders for other pages, rewriting the dialogue, restyling the way I did the dialogue bubbles, because that's just how I roll. I like to do a 180 on everything in the last possible minute and make my own life miserable, haha.
That said, this is good. I'm happy with it. There's really not any sex in this, but if you wanted story, you've got it! There's Marcella reflecting on her relationship with Kayla, there's Kayla reflecting on Marcella's nature, there's allusions to other sets that I've decided to incorporate into the story after all, there's brand new story, there's the introduction of new girls, I mean... as far as starting setups go, this is good.
Next comic I'm already introducing one of those four girls. I don't wanna spend a lot of time creating an entire sex scene between Kayla and Marcella, unless I have time to spare and like the idea. I wanna advance the plot. Kayla will have a small appearance in the pages after this, but not a huge one. Read the comic to figure out who'll be introduced next.
Hope you guys like it!
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Comments
Had to wrap up production on TRE3, now going back to the next chapter of this :) I will come back to Peak Performance on an alternating basis. Release a chapter, do another set, release another chapter, do another set again, etc.
TheDude3DX
2023-08-13 03:11:23 +0000 UTCIs this set actually still work in progress or what happened?
Tequila Dealer
2023-08-12 23:09:30 +0000 UTCHmm blurred is interesting. Maybe too shadowy?
TheDude3DX
2023-06-26 03:30:08 +0000 UTCYay! More bimbo dickgirls - my favorite!!
Samsungnote007
2023-06-20 17:00:40 +0000 UTCI found eyes to be too much blurred
Vi Gi
2023-06-20 14:28:14 +0000 UTCThe comic already got uploaded to a gallery site. :(
TenchiKun
2023-06-20 07:35:32 +0000 UTCLol yup. I went back to her older sets and felt like her dick was big but it wasn't really the shape I felt it should be. So she'll be looking more like this.
TheDude3DX
2023-06-19 15:17:32 +0000 UTCYeah I'll do a full release of all the renders. Don't worry about that. I did have to cut a bunch so I could've planned out my renders a bit better. These are lessons to bring with me to the next set of pages :)
TheDude3DX
2023-06-19 15:16:47 +0000 UTCPS: Kayla being able to go extra wide isn't a special superpower apparently lol. Seems to be her default max excitement size?
TheGreatCornholio
2023-06-19 07:26:31 +0000 UTCThis looks pretty great. Good job! Kinda sad there wasn't much sexual contact between them, and Kayla not showing up much in the next pages (Jessica isn't getting much of a show lol), but I understand wanting to get her out the door since this is Marcella's story. I don't know if/how you storyboarded the rest of the comic, but it would be nice to have Marcella give Kayla updates from time to time on the phone. When that happens we can maybe get one or two snapshots showing what Kayla is up to while getting the info. Like lounging around her house getting sucked off by Taylor, or maybe in her office getting fucked in the ass by Mari lol :D. The layout of the comic and the cutouts worked really great. Definitely different from previous stuff, but it works very well in an actual comic. Sad to see some of the original images weren't used, but that's that. Just remember to please include them all when you can :D. I like the references to the other future sets and (hopefully) comics. Tying them into the narrative gives them more weight. It's also nice seeing the girls talk about each other in a non-adversarial way. I know there is intrigue and plots, but the Girl Within and Words Unspoken really left too much of a conflict vibe with me. Jessica will probably be first since she's next door. Honestly out of all the 4 girls, the one I'm most excited for is Abigail. She has a particular build and I just want to see her ride Marcella balls deep lol.
TheGreatCornholio
2023-06-19 07:16:52 +0000 UTC
