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[Ep 1.18] Final tweaks
Added 2023-03-20 09:07:53 +0000 UTCHey guys! Last week I rewrote the uncoöperative sex scene. Stripping it down to the basics seemed to work. (I was trying too hard to make it sexy in the original version.) I also wrote a first draft of the 'coda' scene that a few contributors thought the episode needed.
I shared the new version of the episode with a few contributors and got some good feedback. There are still a few tasks on the list before it's ready to release:
– There are some art assets that have been supplied by Victoria but not yet added into the game
– There's some rough text and placeholders that need editing
– Feedback received yesterday from xGrotesq and Behbeh needs to be implemented
– The second half of the episode needs some general editing for pacing and dialogue
These things are all straightforward and typical, the normal pre-flight stuff that needs to happen before the episode can go out the door. Expect it Soon™.
Okay, that's it for now, I'm gonna get straight onto coding in art assets.
Comments
To be honest: While waiting I replayed the whole story. Damn what a hot experience! How slowly but well paced the tension is raising - and ebbing…. Finger licking good stuff! Thanks for this! Oh and please hurry 🖖🏼
Juan Homa
2023-03-21 16:22:34 +0000 UTCCan hardly wait….
Juan Homa
2023-03-20 16:01:01 +0000 UTCWell, really glad you got some good feedback on this version of the episode. So I think everything will go smoothly. Good luck!
YourMagnet_adult_version
2023-03-20 14:06:59 +0000 UTC
