Sex scene beta

You could also have implications of her turning the tables on him as he tries to get back at her while she's still in country and create cat and mouse moments or other moments.

Also, I liked what you have so far and hope it keeps going well! And I do like the dice rolls, because you don't always succeed at things.

I liked the options to leave or continue or whatever. And I agree that the pleasure bar is very nice to have. I'd also like to see other options where maybe she turns the table on him, luring him to bed, hand-cuffing him to the posts, stripping him naked, and then just taking what she needs from his phone while she dresses slowly in front of him and makes her way from his room. I like alternatives that could really happen, and as an agent I think i'd do that under the right conditions. I'd also gag him and put the do not disturb sign on the door to buy more get away time.

When is the next update please ?

Uwi

Hope you feel better soon! Holiday colds are a double-wham - you're sick plus you are sick when everyone else is cheerful and you can't join in!

William Urquhart

Also gave it a go. It's definitely an improvement, I think everybody's in agreement there. I would also agree that the current dice roll pop-ups should go. Having a dedicated line/row at the bottom of the page for that might work, but I think a better way of making it less of a distraction/visual obstruction AND provide satisfying insight into what this or that dice roll decided may be to highlight the part that was decided by skill + dice and show the dice roll and/or other factors involved if the player hovers the mouse over it. It doesn't necessarily have to provide minute details of the math behind it but it would be more easy to recognize cause and effect than by purely having the dice rolls et cetera be listed somewhere. I liked the choices offered (I assume that the greyed-out options that required kinks et cetera were the placeholders you spoke of?) although I sometimes would have liked a tiny bit more control over the action - that said, I know from personal experience how quickly writing sequences and choices like this can get insanely complicated and explode in scope. As for the sex itself, I'd say that it might need maybe a little bit more detail, more substance. Striking the balance between pace and detail is difficult but a tiny bit more might still be in order. My concern here is that if there is too little meat there, even the unique scenes before the more generic/randomized scenes later on will feel same-y and not sexy enough. I caught myself thinking "where's the rest of the scene?" a few times playing the last version of the game and I would have liked to see the PC's partners and herself to show a bit more personality, reaction, and enjoyment or aversion during the scenes. That being said, I think this system in itself provides a great foundation for all future work - don't let my input/criticism/nitpicking fool you into thinking that you haven't already done a great job!

JulienJaden

if you choose (thong on bent over the balkony) then (take it), (into the waistband) (between your lips...) after that there are no more options. nothing to cklick on

(⋈◍ ˃ᴗ˂ ◍)。✧BONSAI ✧。

I really enjoyed it! It's a big step up from the old way. I'll have to try to think for a while on how to improve it, but over all kudos.

Buster4MC

I like the way it flows but hoping for more exhibition scene in the game or different type of clothing the FA has to wear to certain events

Jeff

This works well enough to put it in the game. Pretty disappointed it isn't integrated in this release. It's been, what, at least 3 months since the last release, and this just doesn't feel like what I've been waiting for/paying for. It's a good *piece*, but it needs integrated so I can play it with the character I set up. Not to mention, y'know, actually having more game to play. The pace is a bit untenable. I appreciate the way you *think* about creating the game (and the insights you give us along the way), but the actual output is somewhat...lackluster.

Not a *huge* fan of the rolls, but otherwise i think it works really well.

I actually like this scene. If this is the standard I can expect for other sex scenes (either story or randomly generated) than I am really impressed with how it works. A suggestion here, keep the stats in, I like to see how are things progressing throughout the sex.