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Masaki The Devourer II - Page 132

Okay. Had IRL work problems first thing this morning didn’t get the word balloons on and I’m posting from my phone lol.

I was reworking the dialogue on this page again I was trying to balance it where Norah seemed a little mean, but still sensible and Masaki seemed upset, but passively because I didn’t want Norah to be really mad at her, just frustrated with the situation. If that makes sense Let me know what you guys think before I finalize the dialogue

Masaki The Devourer II - Page 132

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Well, somebody has to be the responsible and everybody knows it won't be neither Masaki or Mrs. F, so Norah had to be the bad guy.

M4773n

Plus what is Masaki going to do now exactly? Can't eat go anywhere if she keeps growing.

Goldent5

Norah trying to maintain her weight but it's going to hard to get rid her gut now, going back and forth about her weight. Plus I think Norah was too harsh on both of them, she should apologize to them. To be honest Norah shouldn't think what other people say or think about her, that right there just putting a lot of pressure on her. She'll get over it eventually

Goldent5

Both Norah and Masaki look so happy when they eat and get fat. She needs to learn to accept it and let go. Masaki is so big 🤤 I love it 😍

Volcom25


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