Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (72)

Alrighty! As i had mentioned before (at least, i think i mentioned it, probably in one of the original sketch posts) this chapter was going to have a bit of rewriting and possible resketching later into it. Well, this is the first instance of serious rewriting, even if it's just a taste of it!

Though Leo and Magna haven't officially said "i love you" to each other, the word "love" has been thrown around a few times at this point, so i feel like the impact the original draft might have originally had isn't there anymore, and there for, needed to be changed!

This interaction requires the next page to fully make sense, so bare with me until i finish cleaning that one, but instead of an overly sappy moment being cut off by Magna not wanting to hear an "i love you" while being in such a awkward position, this'll be a much more light-hearted moment, where Leo is, once again, running his smooth talking mouth, and Magna's now just politely letting him know that, she's not only a little overwhelmed by all the compliments being thrown her way, but (as you'll see in the next page) he should save all the sweet talking for later, since they're already relatively deep into their intimate dance~

so it's just a little jab at Leo, really~
i love that blabber mouth, but they're both very emotionally sensitive, in the sense that, they'll drop whatever they're currently doing to be all lovey-dovey. truly, a match made in heaven.
Thankfully, Magna's all revved up, so she'll keep Leo's attention moving forward! (mostly)

i was also happy to throw in a little shaved joke in there, which i felt was really missing in this, since i tend to keep my peeps pretty untrimmed and bushy. But this being a first date and all, i feel like they'd both go the extra mile to tidy up~