Dog & Hound, v0.3
Added 2018-06-19 15:00:00 +0000 UTCHello backers!
This update includes minor changes to the Dog & Hound v0.2, clearing up linguistic concerns with the features in that draft. Please let me know if you think this is ready for prime time!
ALSO
I have recently wondered if Dog & Hound is too similar to Bloodhound Bruisers. A previous (unreleased) draft of this archetype was called Backalley Bulldog. Which do you prefer? Or do you have another suggestion for the Fight Club name?
Thanks,
Benjamin
Comments
I personally don't think the 17th level feature could be confused for anything other than how it's intended to work but I'd like to hear from other people whether or not they think it's clear. If we can't form a consensus about it here I may put out a public draft to see what people think. Maybe Dog & Hound is fine and I'm just being overly nit-picky?
Benjamin Huffman
2018-06-19 21:12:31 +0000 UTCStill have the same issues with the level 17 feature making the tweaks to its stats unclear. I don't care for Backalley Bulldog - it doesn't convey that you have a canine partner any more than Bloodhound Bruiser does. Maybe "Dog's Best Friend"? That messes with the synergy of the 3 and 11 feature names though. Maybe "Canny Canine" or "Cantankerous Canine"? "Doggy Duo"?
Ben Fowler
2018-06-19 15:52:31 +0000 UTC
