The House Wins: Chapter Two
Added 2023-03-01 13:28:55 +0000 UTCWhere chapter one focused on Mallory's first day (and the following morning) in Stepford, this chapter is instead focusing on Mallory and what she was up to at the end of Bet On Black. The mini sequel I wrote, Bet On Red, skipped past Mya's brainwashing, and instead took place sometime after Mallory had her first child.
This chapter is going to show what immediately followed the ending of Bet On Black.
Hope you enjoy.
Comments
I didn't intend to write her that way, but I don't think it's an entirely inaccurate reading? I see her as being of average intelligence, but sort of deliberately dumbing herself down post Stepfordization, if that makes sense? A combination of intentionally acting less capable and also being convinced by propaganda that she is less capable.
Smokey
2023-03-09 16:16:38 +0000 UTCRandom question, but just a vibe I've been getting: would it be fair to say that Mallory is a bit dumber than the average housewife?
Thomas Tolliver
2023-03-09 15:53:35 +0000 UTCThank you!
Smokey
2023-03-01 21:56:51 +0000 UTCVery fun new chapter
Jakitron
2023-03-01 21:49:05 +0000 UTC