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[CriticalMistake] DONE?!
Added 2023-05-22 16:33:36 +0000 UTC
It's finally done!
Six one-on-one poses, I'm a greedy bastard.
I hope you enjoy them.
I'd like to say that... but I can't.
As you can see from the artwork, the finish is very ambiguous!
I think there should be at least three scenes after this to feel right.
Maybe I'll spend a little more time on that,
or do I make the scene a separate piece and make it bigger after this?
That's the big question.
I'd love to hear what you think! Please, leave comments of yours!
Now that we're here, I'll post a new announcement about the future rule of the fan box soon.
I'll probably stick to the original plan of alternating game development and animation every month.
It's been so hot lately!
I thought it was already summer, but I was shocked that it was still May.
I hope everyone is staying healthy!
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やっと作業が終わりました
一対一の体位で6種とは、私自身も欲張りすぎて困りますね。
どうぞ楽しんでいただければ幸いです。
...と言いたいところですが。
作品をご覧いただければわかると思いますが、仕上がり具合が曖昧すぎるんですよねー！
この後、輪姦シーンが3シーンは入らないとちょうどいい感じになるんですが
もう少し時間をかけて貼るか、
それともこの後のシーンは別個の作品としてもっと大きくするか。
それが大きな悩みです。
皆さんのご意見もよろしくお願いします
一応、ある程度完成したので、今後のファンボックスの運営について整理して
新たにお知らせします。
おそらく当初の計画通り、ゲーム開発とアニメが1ヶ月ごとに交互に行われるという内容が全てだと思います。
最近、本当に暑いですね！
もう夏なのかな～と思っていたら、まだ5月だったのでショックでした。
皆様、どうぞお元気でお過ごしください！
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드디어 작업을 끝냈습니다!
일대일 체위로 6종이라니, 저도 참 욕심이 많아서 문제네요.
부디 즐겨주시면 감사하겠습니다.
...라고 말씀드리고 싶지만 말이죠.
작품을 보시면 아시다시피 마무리가 너무 애매해요!
이 뒤로 윤간 장면이 세 씬은 들어가야 딱 느낌이 좋을 것 같은데
시간을 약간만 더 들여서 붙일지,
아니면 이 뒤의 장면은 따로 별개의 작품으로 더 크게 만들지
그게 큰 고민입니다.
여러분의 의견도 남겨주시면 감사하겠습니다!
일단 어느정도 마무리가 되었으니 향후 팬박스 운영에 대해 정리해서
새로 공지 올려드리겠습니다.
아마 맨 처음의 계획대로 게임 개발과 애니메이션이 한달마다 번갈아 진행된다는 내용이 전부일겁니다.
요즘 날이 정말 더워요!
벌써 여름인가~ 하고 봤더니 아직 5월이라 충격받았어요.
모쪼록 다들 건강하게 지내시기 바랍니다!
Comments
I think adding more would make it feel more complete. Overall, an amazing piece and great work!
Migamarx
2023-06-03 07:14:18 +0000 UTCI just started following you because I have seen a part of this animation on rule34. I just wanted to say amazing work! Just the way this whole scene plays out, from the destruction of her suite to her escape try, it already is a joy to watch! Now with the addition of the gangbang and sound this might become an legendary animation. Keep up the amazing work.
witcher12
2023-06-01 12:54:07 +0000 UTCAre you are going to change the prices on Gumroad? and when?
MYUSERNAME
2023-05-25 06:51:34 +0000 UTCMy suggestion is some gangbang scenes as addition.
2023-05-24 19:12:17 +0000 UTCsry, I was resting for a day. I think I have to put 3~4 more scenes after that and sound after that. Thank you!
CajunSpicyGames
2023-05-23 13:35:59 +0000 UTCsry I was resting for a day. I will put sound on it if the animation looks totally finished! :D
CajunSpicyGames
2023-05-23 13:34:35 +0000 UTCI think some gangbang scenes would be a great addition. Is there plan to add sound for this as well?
2023-05-23 12:42:23 +0000 UTC不错，多谢款待
饼蛙
2023-05-23 06:28:08 +0000 UTCLove it! The escape attempt was a great touch!
2023-05-23 01:09:20 +0000 UTCThis was well worth the wait. I can't wait to see what gangbang poses you'll put her through. I'll be waiting patiently. Great job as always!
kekheroicspirit
2023-05-22 22:52:24 +0000 UTCNicely done! But is there going to be sound for this part?
2023-05-22 20:27:28 +0000 UTCLove the progress so far!
MYUSERNAME
2023-05-22 17:25:52 +0000 UTCIncredibly well-done! All the little details, like the escape attempt, are so smooth. I hope your health has been doing better! The end does leave things enticingly ambiguous, though given how long the animation is, it might be good to offer any followup scenes as their own separate file - or with all of it put in a video format, like a webm or something, where someone can jump to different timestamps. I look forward to seeing what your game development ideas may be! Especially if it helps bring you some variety to work with.
Kasseth
2023-05-22 17:04:56 +0000 UTC
