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6.1 - Man And Wife [T3]

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Ted Steel

Wasn't sure I loved how the chapter was shaping up while reading, but by the end it all felt right.

Galeg

Started reading this series a month ago and have finally caught up, now I have the pain of waiting for the weekly releases :((

HP20

True… didn’t see what the answer was

Andres919

Love a good wedding! Also: leading with Bethany? This book is going to be a banger.

Gregory Seppi

Liked the moment with Bethany getting recognized as the first captain! Did not really follow the Banksy scene. He asked Dani to marry him, max made a joke it was up for anyone, Dani arrives and drags banksy back to their table = she rejected his marriage proposal? That was my interpretation but didn't expect a marriage proposal from banksy

John

That was top. So, so, top. My eyes watered when Helge was speaking. That was brilliantly done. You totally had me going right up till Helge started speaking too. It was amazing. Well done 👍

MomoKokomo

Brig, Brick and the Brick. Now they have to open a subsidiary of Maxterplanalytics called Shitting Brigs. Half expected this chapter to keep the playoff results hidden, sending us on a wild goose chase for hints in the next few chappies Memento style.

Ant1h3ld

Likely very sad but very rich. They'll have bet against wrexham even as they shook their heads. Oh and Dylan's at the wedding so no hard feelings I guess lol

Matty

Would’ve liked to see the discord reactions to the game, solid chapter

Denshar

I usually dont like non-sequential timeliness, but this was handled well enough that I didn't hate it. Also, I laughed out loud when it was revealed that there was no castle after mentioning it so much and over such a long period of time.

Nathan

Pore is right! https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/pore-over-vs-pour-over-poor-usage-difference

Ted Steel

". They send loads of photos and then you take those photos into a darkened room and you pore through them". -->. Pour.

Isaac Dahl

Thanks for showing how this affected Sebastian. His speech was my favorite part of this chapter.

MAS


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