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5.16 - Perfect Day [T2]

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Ye friday

Denshar

Where’s my chapter 😭 Ted!!! Seriously, will it be Friday? Please tell us so I can stop compulsively checking my email 🙏🏼

MomoKokomo

always incredible quality, wild consistency, keep it up Ted

Denshar

Thanks for the chapter! I also agree with Galeg above, wrexham use those tactics to do well in the away game to make the finals Max can’t lose to wrexham so he has to put out his best team Accidental promotion

Will

Feeling the sickbed vibe. Bless. You're gonna reap just what you sow.

Richard Carling

It's gonna be a Chester Wrexham final isn't it

Jaydan Man

Ooh hang on, that's tasty.

Ted Steel

Fixed the 'away' thing in particular. Important missed word! Thanks

Ted Steel

Probably so, that'd be a sad read

Ductor Storage

TFTC! Just have to say, Mondays and Fridays are my favorite days since I joined. Your chapters always lifts my mood. :)

HN

This makes more sense … (hopefully)

Andres919

Championship playoff final is going to be chapter 1 of the next book isn’t it?! The ultimate cliff hanger.

Thomas Barrett

For a second there I was convinced the imp had asked for the.advice because he was gonna control wrexham with those tactics.

Galeg

Surprisingly helpful imp appearance! I'm kind of surprised we haven't had a Bonnie cameo yet what with Angel's eviction. Regarding the author's note at the end: does that mean just a chapter on Friday, or that the Monday chapter is getting delayed by a day or two? Thanks, and congrats again! Edit Suggestions: Jay wrapped me in his arms. Elin wrapped Jay and I in her arms. -- I -> me (I know you typically keep this as is because people talk this way, but this one feels really unnatural to me with the previous sentence being basically the same, only with 'me' instead of 'I'.) "He's injury prone, they think -- injury prone -> injury-prone Palace had a great home record, Wrexham a mostly terrible one. -- I think there should be an 'away' before 'one', as Wrexham's home record seems irrelevant at this point.

Tareq Malikyar

One chapter left? So the next and final in just one chapter? Oh boy… Chester to lose to Luton

Andres919

Got the Lou Reed reference in at the last minute! I am beyond happy that Dani scored the goal that sent them to the top. Literal tears of joy.

Geoff Urland

TYFTC!

Kanyau


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