5.14 - May Day [T2]
Added 2026-01-23 17:25:40 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the edits! Fixed. Yeah flash means ostentatious.
Ted Steel
2026-01-28 15:07:28 +0000 UTCEmiliano is so clever, he knows a redemption arc is even more impactful at the eleventh hour. Two weeks buddy. Cutting it close, but two weeks...
Matty
2026-01-26 17:51:36 +0000 UTCI was thinking where Raffi is now. It would be interested to see what happened to him and maybe some the other people/players that got left behind.
Andres919
2026-01-26 00:11:19 +0000 UTCYesssss. Always up for more Henri.
Sam McGuffin
2026-01-24 10:31:38 +0000 UTCI miss Henri
Jake Lewis
2026-01-24 08:30:34 +0000 UTCI very much enjoyed all of the story/character threads Ted managed to tug on this chapter. Now all I'm waiting to see is the (proper)return of Nick and the Imps, a face to face with the Entity overseeing everything after Max trucks Wrexham in the finale(mwah hah hah) and Somehow, Raffi Brown Returns. In all seriousness I think next season when Max needs to go full 100percent from the start to avoid relegation from the premier league is when we see/get the attention of the spiritual FA. I also want to believe there is more to Raffi and that early book drama than just bank account number go up.
Delsark
2026-01-24 07:09:44 +0000 UTCLove the Foquita cameo
Ductor Storage
2026-01-24 05:56:15 +0000 UTCI really appreciate that this chapter is a bit more of a breather, and it didn’t feel too short to me despite the disclaimer. While the game action is always great, the last few chapters almost felt like we were rushing towards the end of the season.
leafinthepond
2026-01-24 04:41:00 +0000 UTCWords cannot express how excited I am for an Henri-heavy chapter! Congrats on the deserved publication deal. Stay safe, everyone in America about to get hammered by this storm (I love snow, but I hate the ice that's about to come). Edit Suggestions: if you've got a flash car you've got to hide it -- flash -> flashy (unless a flash car is something I don't know about?) "Bon apettit," -- apettit -> appetit which would send the amount I was sending to Tempsford FC close to the 2,500 a week mark. -- send -> increase (just for some word variety; there's a lot of 'send' in this sentence/paragraph)
Tareq Malikyar
2026-01-24 01:38:10 +0000 UTCMy bet is on the castle of Max Best himself: the Deva Stadium
Ulrich
2026-01-23 18:59:49 +0000 UTCWe got check-ins from beloved characters, info on Angel's mood and future, we know more about the wedding, get a peek at how the business office is coping, we're set up for the end of the season, and we get Henri! For half a chapter mostly focused on James Bond and Karl Marx, this really moved the story forward.
Geoff Urland
2026-01-23 18:33:37 +0000 UTCIt was weaker than the norm, but the worst? Feels pretty harsh.
Galeg
2026-01-23 18:21:54 +0000 UTCThe best castle in the country? That can only be Newcastle Castle, which hosts weddings for 40-50!
Droman
2026-01-23 18:21:00 +0000 UTCYes! Return of the true main character of the series: Henri Lyons! Can't wait. Also, congrats on getting a new deal worked out for publish + audio
Crimson King99
2026-01-23 17:54:46 +0000 UTCCongratulations on the contract, great and well deserved. But after all the build up that was the weakest chapter in a long time. The worst part of web novels is empty words and most of the time you’re great at avoiding that. I’d rather you take a break when needed and keep usual high standard than rush something out.
Thomas Barrett
2026-01-23 17:49:35 +0000 UTC
