5.13 - One Club Mentality [T2]
Added 2026-01-20 15:50:22 +0000 UTCComments
Late comment, but it's unfortunate that Briggy never brought up her concerns again- and a bit sad that Max is clearly too busy to remember to ask her what she meant. I do think it was kinda odd he didn't press her on it at that moment, but again, busy and getting more shares was always going to get the limelight. I hope we got some insight into how that thread gets tied off before Angel's loan finishes, if only to satisfy my curiosity on the matter.
Krish Yadav
2026-03-15 19:17:32 +0000 UTCThanks!
Ted Steel
2026-01-28 15:13:34 +0000 UTCSince feedback hasn’t landed well on the next chapter. This one is awesome and one of the strongest recently!
Thomas Barrett
2026-01-24 07:42:26 +0000 UTCPlot required comment Sam. TY
Richard Carling
2026-01-23 09:35:00 +0000 UTCLove to see Max playing! I feel like he may have trouble staying under the radar once Chester gets to the Premier League, though--he can try to keep his stats down, but people have eyes.
leafinthepond
2026-01-21 03:45:29 +0000 UTCLooks like everything is still on pace for a Chester v. Wrexham playoff final where Max will refuse to lose. I'm now more convinced that Emma is pregnant; Max's commitment to the dad joke is next level (Honey I Shrunk the Kits is *chef's kiss*). Thanks for the chapter, and I hope you're feeling better. Edit Suggestions: You went further than any Chester team has gone in the cups. -- But what about Max's babies? Haley Goodhew was rested, as was Femi, Victoria Rose, and Kit Hodges. -- second was -> were Did you used to sign everyone's shirts and cry and all that? -- used -> use (though I think 'did...used to' may be acceptable in British English? idk, looks weird to me) it had to be hard to hear that you have wrecked a club's culture -- have -> had
Tareq Malikyar
2026-01-21 02:59:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Sam McGuffin
2026-01-21 02:43:20 +0000 UTCOh poor angel, her arc has been really well done - changed my opinion loads of times and gutted shes leaving
James
2026-01-20 21:54:38 +0000 UTCLove the Angel bits. I think she's the most sympathetic character to be on the receiving end of an Max Best Ice Age.
Droman
2026-01-20 18:11:51 +0000 UTCPreston play to their number 6. Suddenly three Chester players rush towards him! Was this the Venus Fly Trap that Max was practicing with the Welsh Boys at Saltney? Also thanks for the heads up yesterday, it saved me an entire day of obsessively checking patreon for this chapter. And as always a great chapter. Is there a form for how good a chapter is out of 10, save the ink it only ever needs the 10 box to be checked.
Thomas
2026-01-20 16:37:37 +0000 UTC
