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5.4 - Owen Elmham's Second Half [T1]

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Ted Steel

How to access discord?

Isaiah

Mad, all of you. Mad! Perfect closing for the chapter.

Gregory Seppi

What a monster of a chapter!

Jake Lewis

Srsly tho, why the hell did you open the chapter like that. Are you peeping my YouTube profile with ai. Insane

Caerold

Okay, go ahead and call me out. But they’re a fantastic drummer doing a classic kids anime song

Caerold

Epic chapter!

JaegerMaxim

Cupset as Seals claim quarters. The fallout from the off the pitch dark arts might even overshadow the most red yellow card ever. I demand a colour chart.

Richard Carling

Bloody hell... that's one absolute unit of a chapter, and packed full as well! Absolutely loved it! This chapter had it all, laughs, anger, action, coziness... well done, well done indeed.

HN

Why did this chapter make me emotional? Another banger. 10/10 TYFTC!

Kanyau

Late posting, thanks for getting this to us before bed! Brilliant high octane action. Edit Suggestions: we can [bleep] it bin it right off. -- I think get rid of the first it? (I'm failing to figure out what expletive would work with this as written.) causing what in the NFL would have been called a false start, -- uh, a false start in the NFL is when the offense jumps the gun, not the defense. I think you're looking for encroachment, or more confusingly, offsides.

Tareq Malikyar

I love it when Max goes 'full Max' about things. You know its been a good chapter when you're ruefully shaking your head and smiling by the end.

Kevin Flynn


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