4.12 - Victory to Escape [T1]
Added 2025-11-11 14:28:14 +0000 UTC12.
"This frigging game is ruining my lif
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I'm late but it'd be funny if Brooke had a PA of 140
Ductor Storage
2025-12-10 14:50:47 +0000 UTCFixed the mistakes, thanks!
Ted Steel
2025-11-12 11:34:32 +0000 UTCI found one (and fixed it) - thanks!
Ted Steel
2025-11-12 11:34:19 +0000 UTCUh. In my experience, Americans pronounce the W? The one Owen I know does say his name a bit like Oh-when but it sounds a lot like Oh-en to the point that it’s hard to know it’s there. But it’s clearly not just Oh-en when he says his name.
Mack
2025-11-12 07:40:29 +0000 UTC"She had pronounced Owen's name as Oh-en." ....isn't this just normal? Do British people really enunciate the W?
BelligerentGnu
2025-11-11 23:48:38 +0000 UTCThere is some leg/left confusion in there. Fixed
Richard Carling
2025-11-11 22:13:45 +0000 UTCPoor Jackie. I liked this chapter quite a bit; Max's joy around the youth teams is infectious, and the way Brooke handles Max is masterful. Edit Suggestions: I could rip his head all the wayoff his body?' -- wayoff -> way off I only needed 444 XP to unlock the next achievement -- achievement -> attribute
Tareq Malikyar
2025-11-11 21:11:39 +0000 UTCYep!
Ted Steel
2025-11-11 20:57:35 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always. I dont think Max is wrong about how hard a line he sets for teamwork, but he only has one method for dealing with it, which is inelegant. If he was a tiny bit craftier, maybe he could sidestep some of the issues without shaking the whole club
Crimson King99
2025-11-11 19:45:39 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I appreciate Brooke turning the movie around on Max
Will
2025-11-11 18:04:55 +0000 UTC
