4.9 - Day One
Added 2025-10-31 15:24:49 +0000 UTC9.
As part of the training for Pradee
Comments
Dove replicating Max's scouting scares me for some reason
Ductor Storage
2025-12-10 10:24:49 +0000 UTCThe falcon? Famous Falk, Peter Falk, played Columbo. "Just one more thing...?" Norway, Sweden and Germany have loads of them.
Richard Carling
2025-11-02 05:10:21 +0000 UTCI don’t think Max would get zero wins in the Prem, and I don’t think MD would be stupid enough to fire him even if he did (although maybe I’m wrong about that). But I do see how even Max probably can’t guarantee that Chester avoids relegation, and for someone like Max who loves control and progression, I can understand how that would be a terrifying possibility.
leafinthepond
2025-11-01 00:34:05 +0000 UTCYou caught up! I've been enjoying your recent comments. When I get a minute I'm going to go back and match some of them to the chapters. In most cases I can guess...
Ted Steel
2025-10-31 23:57:14 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!!
Ted Steel
2025-10-31 23:51:18 +0000 UTC"His first name, because that's how he wanted to be branded. His surname was, to everyone's surprise, one of the most common in Italy." I feel like you're talking directly to me XD
Olof Falk
2025-10-31 22:06:01 +0000 UTCI wholeheartedly agree with Andrew in re: the quality of this writing being so far beyond everything else on RR, especially considering that you put out two huge chonker chapters per week. There are so many amazing one-liners in this: Either way, I'm sure the bangs rocked the stadium. (hehe, especially with the Jonny Planter shenanigans) "a real Rolls-Royce of a player" Edit Suggestions: I'll give Cheb Ramadam off. -- Ramadam -> Ramadan It helped that we were joint-cheapest away day in the division and that the city of Chester was a good day out. -- I think this sentence needs a 'the' before 'joint'.
Tareq Malikyar
2025-10-31 20:10:19 +0000 UTCTalk about perverse incentives. That was a lot of fun though.
BelligerentGnu
2025-10-31 18:54:12 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, especially this: "Stop signing midfielders, Max." I normally only laugh on the inside while reading, but that had me do a full out loud laugh :)
HN
2025-10-31 17:24:16 +0000 UTCSounds like she's thinking about moving to 'Straya
HN
2025-10-31 17:22:49 +0000 UTCNot as bad as what a coworker said to me yesterday. (I knew it was his last day at work before leaving for vacation) "Have a nice vacation, Matt." And he says, "Thanks. You, too."
Galeg
2025-10-31 17:06:56 +0000 UTCTed is the greatest living Englishman
Tyler Jansen
2025-10-31 16:42:43 +0000 UTCFixed three (!!!) instances of me writing Sanda. Crazy stuff.
Ted Steel
2025-10-31 16:25:08 +0000 UTCPlayoff Run! Playoff run! Playoff Run! Playoff Run! 🎶
Andres919
2025-10-31 16:01:15 +0000 UTCHonest question: are you writing this series as it goes, or was this mostly written a long time ago, and now you just tweak/polish? The volume and quality that you put out is unlike any other story I follow, and it’s not even close. Are you just very prolific, or do you spend more time than most people writing? MY hats off to you, it’s quite impressive.
Andrew Pribble
2025-10-31 15:57:13 +0000 UTC
