4.7 - Good Month, Bad Month [T1]
Added 2025-10-24 15:27:43 +0000 UTC7.
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The comments about Patreon made me laugh out loud. That was pretty good.
Gyslain Desgagne
2025-10-27 17:27:54 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
Ted Steel
2025-10-26 10:42:01 +0000 UTCEdit suggestion: “Chester will go going to Ipswich” change go to be.
Riekko
2025-10-26 05:33:24 +0000 UTCWhat a satisfying and perfect chapter. Just classic PM/SS. I don't know how you do it, but month in and month out, this always manages to be my favorite series. I'm never not super excited about a new chapter. Keep up the stellar work.
Eidetic Eidolon
2025-10-25 19:51:23 +0000 UTCShameless.
Richard Carling
2025-10-25 18:56:14 +0000 UTCBest is doing step_overs. Best is fouled. Stepovers is a word now? Laughed out aloud at the Best troll.
Richard Carling
2025-10-25 18:53:44 +0000 UTCits late at night after a long day, and Im giggling under the covers like a school kid reading this. Thanks Ted.
MomoKokomo
2025-10-25 06:11:56 +0000 UTCI hate that mistake but still make it three times per first draft. Absolutely unforgivable that one makes it into the final version! Booooooo!
Ted Steel
2025-10-24 21:29:11 +0000 UTCI only know him from people saying 'Max is like Mike Leach!' I saw a couple of clips and thought, yeah! That's what I'm going for!
Ted Steel
2025-10-24 21:28:20 +0000 UTCTFTC! Lovely chapter as always. I love that you have such a consistently high language level. I read a lot of new/indie authors, so it's not always the case. That's also why this surprised me so much! "You're ego's writing cheques your passing range can't handle." (You're -> Your) ;)
HN
2025-10-24 20:00:32 +0000 UTCAre you a Mike Leach fan? I feel like Max's press talks are very Mike Leach.
GuyWhoReadsALot
2025-10-24 18:04:41 +0000 UTCLol, I forgot about "he do opposite".
Galeg
2025-10-24 17:49:01 +0000 UTCI think this is the most "He do opposite" chapter possible. Loved it!
Geoff Urland
2025-10-24 17:05:01 +0000 UTCThanks - the property magnet thing is a joke from the old books. I think you started with Soccer Supremo, right?
Ted Steel
2025-10-24 17:02:15 +0000 UTCJust one line from Henri (which was pure gold btw) is not enough for a fix, and while it's awesome that Pascal's coming back, I still feel disappointed for him. Edit Suggestions: "Some people want to make everything about themself." -- themself -> themselves (this sentence as written sounds really weird to me) The interplay between Peter, Dan, and myself was all angles. -- myself -> me (I think I remember Max complaining about people using reflexive pronouns incorrectly, so I can understand keeping this as is) CA120 and 125. -- missing a space after CA "Property magnet," mumbled Emma. -- magnet -> magnate
Tareq Malikyar
2025-10-24 16:48:17 +0000 UTCThat last line may be the best line ever said by man. Great chapter.
Thomas
2025-10-24 16:22:43 +0000 UTCMy favorite part of Soccer Supremo is when Ted Steel personally compliments me in his story "Being a supporter on Patreon is the closest equivalent in the modern world to sainthood."
Jon
2025-10-24 15:42:55 +0000 UTC
