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4.5 - November Rain [T1]

5.

Tuesday, November 30

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No, we haven't heard much about that.

Ted Steel

I may have missed it or somehow glossed over it, but what happened with the guy who's life Max saved on the pitch?

Sal 101

I never made that connection!

Caerold

No you in… lmfao

Caerold

Shotgun XD

Peculiar Oranges

I meant to make a link in the bottom text but I was so tired I forgot! The links are set to never expire but for some reason they do anyway. This will work for a while: https://discord.gg/pUnNwZEkUK

Ted Steel

Awesome as always. And if i can hijack this comment field to ask; where to I find the discord invite link?

Isaac Dahl

There’s a lot of noteworthy things going on in the November rain music video but my favourite bit is when some dude dives through a cake. That man is bad in a crisis.

hercule pyro

Man I’m so slow on the uptake… Ian Evans has the voice mail about a topiary of him and now there’s a TREX at bumpers… was so confused about the Dino being there but it just clicked. Ted you are so great with all the little details I look forward to these chapters every week! Thanks so much for this story

YakoDune

Emiliano is gonna be trouble Haha our very own romeo

Matty

Owen Zach and Brooke all skeet shooting would be great

YakoDune

Gotta put Owen on the billboard for this one.

ThereCastle

I think the abductor thing is a mad chasm in my head that should be something quite different but I'm too tired to think right now. I read the first part of your comment to my wife and she laughed her head off and now she wants me to write that series...

Ted Steel

Max really does make people do the most insane things. I can't imagine making someone so mad they go find a shotty for the express purpose of destroying a phone to make a point. Incredible, as usual!

Crimson King99

The Soccer Supremo arc is over. Next up: Property Prima Donna. The whole exchange with Emiliano had me cackling. Lovely chapter! Edit Suggestions: We probably could be if we lived in the same hemisphere. -- is Max just bad at geography, or is he being cheeky here? At the moment it's just little abductor tweaks -- abductor -> adductor, unless Chester are into kidnapping now? Andrew Harrison has tweaked his abductor again. -- abductor -> adductor

Tareq Malikyar

Norfolking joke had me rolling.

Galeg

Way to go Owen!

Geoff Urland

Yeah something's gone wrong there. Looking into it!

Ted Steel

TFTC! Not sure if Max doesn't count summers or what it is, but, according to my math, 5.5 years would be 2007 days.

HN

Owen and his anger issues manifesting in unexpected ways was a great way to end this chapter. I look forward to the chaos with the brig

Will

TYFTC!

Kanyau


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