14.8 - The Last Dance
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I laughed and cried. Thank you.
Javier Quintero
2025-02-24 17:02:35 +0000 UTCPeak once again
Memoryofgold
2025-02-24 07:13:31 +0000 UTCBeautiful chapter!! Loved the scissor kick finish into proposal combo!!
Silvertooth09
2025-02-23 21:33:55 +0000 UTCThis was beautiful. It’s so fun to experience the tension but have a relief of happiness in the end. There’s so much sadness in the real world, I appreciate so much getting to enjoy Max kicking ass and being awesome on the way.
MomoKokomo
2025-02-22 19:41:33 +0000 UTCThank you for that beautiful chapter!
EducatedFool
2025-02-22 16:48:10 +0000 UTCWhat are the punishments going to be? Did Nick block communications from Raffi to Pascal/Max/everyone and that's why Raffi was stunned on the ignored handshake? Will he get those massive fees to buy out Baggers/Youngster/anyone Max has built up? Such a good chapter, but I'm waiting for the hammer to come down.
K
2025-02-22 16:31:43 +0000 UTCFucking hell, Ted. So much going on in this chapter and you brought it home on every count. Beautifully satisfying.
BelligerentGnu
2025-02-22 08:58:53 +0000 UTCThis is great 😁
Mack
2025-02-22 06:35:07 +0000 UTCGreat ending
ck g
2025-02-22 01:06:54 +0000 UTCI'm not sure you pressed 'enter' at the right moment here?
Ted Steel
2025-02-22 00:31:40 +0000 UTCHa! I had plans for something like this one day! I guess it's more common than I thought!
Ted Steel
2025-02-21 22:25:57 +0000 UTCI would love for max to do something like this at some point https://www.reddit.com/r/nfl/comments/10vg7sy/throwback_all_5_minutes_and_27_seconds_of/
Froyo Baggins
2025-02-21 22:18:43 +0000 UTCI gave him a squeeze. "Never forget, we're only here because of you. Everything I ever achieved starts with Jackie Reaper and continues with you
Richard Griffiths
2025-02-21 22:05:32 +0000 UTCI always cry at football matches. Beautiful game, Max. And what a catch at the end there. Goal. Goal at the end. Lovely.
Richard Carling
2025-02-21 21:22:54 +0000 UTCBut if College kept winning, TNS would find themselves ten, twelve, fourteen points behind. With games in hand, yes, but they weren't used to that sort of pressure. If Saltney kept winning, TNS would probably crack. (saltney not college)
Ricky Kukowski
2025-02-21 20:53:05 +0000 UTCAlso, just finished the chapter love it 4/5. Going to be hard keeping baggers after this
James Probert
2025-02-21 20:51:41 +0000 UTCRachel is a ledge.
Geoff Urland
2025-02-21 20:51:19 +0000 UTCBaggers doesn't shin them!
Ted Steel
2025-02-21 20:49:50 +0000 UTCYes! Fixed, thanks.
Ted Steel
2025-02-21 20:48:58 +0000 UTCBaggers: https://youtube.com/shorts/v7E1WJVMhzA?si=CjNxbYpKEmnVJQVW
Geoff Urland
2025-02-21 20:45:18 +0000 UTCIt was in the Welsh FA's interest to see Welsh teams do well, after all. But if College kept winning, TNS would find themselves ten... Shouldnt it be saltney?
James Probert
2025-02-21 20:35:18 +0000 UTCThe tension in the chapter was amazing. Thanks for writing it.
Thomas
2025-02-21 20:25:59 +0000 UTC
