10.13 - Gateshead Revisited
Added 2024-07-22 11:46:44 +0000 UTC13.
Part One - Et in Man
Comments
I never thought I would care about soccer, let alone fictional soccer but damn LETS GO CHESTER!
andrew felber
2024-07-24 00:46:08 +0000 UTCThank you so much.
Ted Steel
2024-07-22 22:30:44 +0000 UTCI'm a grown man and an engineer to boot. I'm generally not very emotional, but the scene with Max's mom really touched me. Max is there wanting to take care of her to the best of his ability while balancing work, money, time, and relationships. He has the weight of so many people that he wants to help on his shoulders. He sees the light at the end of of the tunnel; he sees a better path for his mom, but he can't give it to her yet. In that moment Max is overwhelmed and starting to mentally spiral into "I don' think I can... maybe if I..." scenarios, when a friend comes along and guides him away from his thoughts to say, "It's ok. We're here to help. Let's take walk and talk about the options when we get back." Isn't that what we all need? A friend to lend a hand when we are overwhelmed. Someone to share the burden when we can't take another step forward. That was beautiful. Thank you Ted.
Jonathan
2024-07-22 18:27:12 +0000 UTCTop table three-way!
Richard Carling
2024-07-22 15:16:32 +0000 UTCHoly shit, what a chapter. That one dragged me all over the emotional map. My favorite bits were two little character moments. Henri playing big brother to sharky and bringing the crowd along, and Youngster wanting to make sure Zach really does understand that God loves the Cleveland Browns. Just perfect.
BelligerentGnu
2024-07-22 13:16:57 +0000 UTCDid max just twisted his ankle.....wow the suspense is killing me...great chapter and great writing....just hoped that max would stick to his philosophy.....otherwise awesome chapter mate will done
srijan arya
2024-07-22 13:05:32 +0000 UTCMax Best blue and white army! Max Best blue and white army!
Alwan Abdurrahman
2024-07-22 13:05:17 +0000 UTCJust been told Wisey is in the starting lineup and on the bench. Will fix it soon!
Ted Steel
2024-07-22 12:25:20 +0000 UTCAff's mum was a great character, hope to see more of her. Thanks for the chappy!
tp19orc
2024-07-22 12:24:26 +0000 UTC
