10.10 - The Rock
Added 2024-07-10 13:26:58 +0000 UTC
10.
Thursday, March
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Ultimate Football - the only answer to a FIFA ultimatum. (Footbol Ultimo)
Richard Carling
2024-07-13 17:50:37 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed this, also liking how you are pacing the season moving along. Your notes must be insane to keep track of players, names and scores haha
Chris Memmott
2024-07-12 23:19:35 +0000 UTCOk. So. “Beefer” jumped the shark. At the very least make it a name that’s somewhat plausible. Football Renaldo or something, idk maybe a famous coach? Two. You know at least one buisness partner with a private jet, he can relocate you worst case. Or you could just drive up the coast to another airport
John Marchman
2024-07-12 14:03:23 +0000 UTCYes! Fixed, thanks.
Ted Steel
2024-07-11 10:09:23 +0000 UTC"and some stables of the British high street..." Was this meant to be "and some staples of the British high street..."
Kanyau
2024-07-11 08:25:41 +0000 UTCThis was not the chapter I expected but damn I loved it. And I'm so glad for that closing bit, I was worried about Max's ability to treat Emma like she deserves
BelligerentGnu
2024-07-10 23:05:24 +0000 UTCWow what a chapter...excited for where the story is heading with healthy dose of good vibe romance and finally having Max get some much needed good financial thing going for him....and most of all starting the next stage in both relationship I.e emma (romantic) 🤩and Mateo (partners),very excited about that.....just hope that both relationship are long,fun, fruitful and meaningful. Especially mateo one too which shows that he can develop and trust people outside his chester radius and have them become crucial allies against increasing number of enemies he keeps creating for himself 😅. Seeing this growth for max is very rewarding
srijan arya
2024-07-10 20:13:22 +0000 UTCI'm absolutely tiktoked brainedrnight now but having Emma match Max has the "somebody gonna match my freak" song going. Genuinely delighted he has her and I love the way you write them together. In normal chapter when they have only a couple lines together it sometimes feels like she doesn't really get him but in chapters where it's just the two you really get it. Thanks for the chapter.
Weirwood
2024-07-10 18:35:58 +0000 UTCThanks a million!
Ted Steel
2024-07-10 16:18:22 +0000 UTCUsually read on email but had to come here to post how great this chapter was.
Simon Macdonald
2024-07-10 15:13:12 +0000 UTCi'm going to read the chapter i promise but i'm too hopped up on coffee right now and about to go into a meeting but i have to congratulate you at the very least on spelling rhythim correctly and also the audiobook as well since i'm already here
Jon
2024-07-10 13:31:07 +0000 UTC
