9.12 - All Or Nothing
Added 2024-05-27 09:45:18 +0000 UTC12.
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It's 3.43 am. I have asthma. I can't sleep because I was busy catching up to this chapter. You better take responsibility!
Craxuan
2024-07-26 19:44:31 +0000 UTCI feel like some people were acting a little strangely to Max's craziness from last chapter. But like, dude is a manic, little psycho, and he has been for a while. The system has just completely made him into an entirely different person. Recall Max from all the way at the beginning to Max now. It's just so crazy to see what Bravery - 20, Aggression - 20, and all the other unknown stats affecting his personality have turned him into it. Sometimes, it turns him into what we saw last chapter...which is a real mess. I can only imagine how strung out Max would be at this point if he didn't have such a strong support system. But I've been loving every second of it. Keep up the great work, Ted.
Eidetic Eidolon
2024-05-31 03:27:28 +0000 UTCAs Beth said while interviewing Max on her podcast in 8.1, CF is "the only player who can truly be said to have got the better of you on a football pitch"
Raymond Alderman
2024-05-30 02:27:50 +0000 UTCIncredibly satisfying. Thank you very much for writing.
Average at Best
2024-05-29 05:05:16 +0000 UTCTed “pulitzer” steel
Josh
2024-05-28 15:57:58 +0000 UTCI thought that was the kit anyways. Glad it matches my imagination now.
K
2024-05-28 09:04:24 +0000 UTCDoes Fierce have positioning 20?
Richard Carling
2024-05-27 23:58:11 +0000 UTCCame to the comments to say exactly this. It wasn't the writing, it was the format.
Kanyau
2024-05-27 21:14:18 +0000 UTCThank you!
GuyWhoReadsALot
2024-05-27 17:06:59 +0000 UTCThe defender for Kidderminster who had a couple of epic battles against Max. There was one match that sent Max into a spiral because Fierce shut him out. He also featured in the 'What's A King to a God' chapter.
Ted Steel
2024-05-27 17:03:43 +0000 UTCReminder who Christian Fierce is?
GuyWhoReadsALot
2024-05-27 16:53:26 +0000 UTCNot only was this chapter about getting the fans to understand Max, but it was the people Max had already opened up to helping Max open up to even more people. Max doesn't trust the fans but wants them to trust him completely - Emma and Henrí, and MD, and the whole team are helping him open up so they can trust him (and maybe letting Max see that it's ok to be open a bit). Good stuff, Ted .
Geoff Urland
2024-05-27 15:49:02 +0000 UTCYou weren’t kidding about that kit. Beautiful!
Daniel
2024-05-27 13:05:44 +0000 UTCIt's fierce's time!! Let's goo
Matty
2024-05-27 12:09:21 +0000 UTCThe only issue with the last chapter was the nature of a serial release mate and not wanting to wait a few days for the climax. When this is out as a book, I think it's the perfect break point.
Felix Skinner
2024-05-27 11:59:41 +0000 UTCThat might just be the best chapter in the series so far! Absolutely loved it.
Crimson Sunset
2024-05-27 11:54:16 +0000 UTCThat was a special chapter. Think you peaked their mate. Thanks :-)
Chris Memmott
2024-05-27 11:11:08 +0000 UTCFucking loved this chapter.
Hendobear1
2024-05-27 11:00:39 +0000 UTCThis chapter was a complete success, imo. Satisfying and explanatory, and I absolutely loved Max's allies pulling together to be there when he needed them. I think moving the break might well help, but this chapter makes a world of difference.
BelligerentGnu
2024-05-27 10:58:46 +0000 UTCI love it!!! Its always scary when youre reading or watching something and theres a big hype build up, because what if it ends up dissapointing?? Just look at tv shows such as Game of Thrones or The Mentalist, where they hyped and hyped the end, only for it to ruin the series itself. Im more than glad to say that, for me at least, this chapter was definitely worth the hype, especially considering this is your first (or one of your firsts) draft. I do agree that adding on some more anti-max actions from the board will help justify the maxplosion, which will elevate what i see as a great chapter to a fantastical one
Juan Ocariz
2024-05-27 10:32:39 +0000 UTCHoly crap! Literally got goosebumps at the end, nailed it man
Jake Lewis
2024-05-27 10:18:53 +0000 UTC
