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9.5 - With Ball Without Ball (Part Two)

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I’m thinking Mr. Yaxley, most trustworthy person in the story

Geoff R.

So officially this replay would be a friendly fixture. Nothing hinges upon the result, or even the game, except the FA reputation. If Swindon accepts, then Max gets another fixture to develop his players. This is a crazy idea that ignites the imagination. Great chapter

Richard Carling

There was something last chapter about the contract being exactly the same, though I don't remember the specific wording.

MrHrulgin

Or there’s a poison pill hidden in the contracts that somehow counters Daddy Star buying the club

Greenstar

Gotta be Sebastian, right? He’s already a silent investor, believes in max, and wants the club to support his daughter if Max flames out

Greenstar

Personally, I was surprised it wasn't Brig. Max has literally trusted the man with his life after all.

BelligerentGnu

Wonder if the 20 pound raises has a secondary bonus of raising the team reputation among other players. Like they see chester commits early to its players.

Joppest

I feel personally attacked. That ending was new peak Max though, and I fucking love it.

BelligerentGnu

That ending..... 🫣🫡🫠🫥🥰

Geoff Urland

The first name was Beth and not Emma? Edit - missed on my first read that he called Emma "basically an agent"

Geoff Urland


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