8.6 - Project Youth
Added 2024-03-08 12:41:16 +0000 UTC6.
Friday July 5
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Comments
Is James Pond a commenter villain? It sounds like a commenter villain name. And yeah, Max. Football being back feels damn good.
BelligerentGnu
2024-03-09 00:20:34 +0000 UTCSame, I only really noticed it in the "Are you nervous?" section.
Soup
2024-03-08 17:30:53 +0000 UTCOmg I am sooo hyped. I always want to not read for à few chapters so I can binge but I have no self control 😔
James Probert
2024-03-08 15:17:46 +0000 UTCThanks! I'll review it when I've got a clear head.
Ted Steel
2024-03-08 14:49:40 +0000 UTCNot minor to me! Tell me what he should say!
Ted Steel
2024-03-08 14:49:22 +0000 UTCMinor point - affirmative is an incredibly American thing to say, not sure I've ever heard a British squaddie use it
Felix Skinner
2024-03-08 14:20:45 +0000 UTCThat board numpty is going to be a season-long PITA 🫓
Geoff Urland
2024-03-08 14:15:01 +0000 UTCWell said!
Caerold
2024-03-08 13:54:30 +0000 UTCThis feels like a proper chapter one right here. I'm getting excited for the climb now too.
Carlos Garcia
2024-03-08 13:49:31 +0000 UTCGood stuff as always. Only other comment is that it is a bit unclear who is speaking in a few sections. Not a massive problems, but I found myself confused once or twice.
Arne
2024-03-08 13:42:59 +0000 UTC"The only thing that can stop us is ourselves " - Uh oh.. Why do I think Max just invoked Murphy here?
Haricharan Raghunathan
2024-03-08 13:07:27 +0000 UTC
