7.13 - Eight Views of Emma
Added 2024-01-29 15:20:24 +0000 UTC13.
Evening Glow
Comments
This is the only story I have ever actually followed week by week. Usually I let them build up and binge, but its simply too entertaining!
Chris Memmott
2024-01-30 22:00:23 +0000 UTCWacky romance is the niche I've been targeting all this time :)
Ted Steel
2024-01-30 12:00:38 +0000 UTCYeah I don't have any friends any more because I never shut up about the Song dynasty.
Ted Steel
2024-01-30 12:00:00 +0000 UTCThat was cute.
Froyo Baggins
2024-01-30 08:32:42 +0000 UTCHarmony has nothing to discuss. The forum server service Discord.com won't change their name anyway. It is a very friendly and polite forum, curated by (optional) Patreon tier to avoid spoilers.
Richard Carling
2024-01-30 02:57:09 +0000 UTCBut discord sounds scary. Can we create a new platform and call it, I don't know, harmony?
Max Milbury
2024-01-30 02:43:11 +0000 UTCBut Tedddddddd... this is like April (May?) 2024. Eddie's boys are on a run of 9 wins in 10 league games and are back in contention for a top 5 spot. They're healthy and Eddie is a changed man, making 5 subs a game every game. You've got your future history all wrong.
Max Milbury
2024-01-30 02:41:01 +0000 UTCThe stressful or ennui times are when we reach for rhymes. Poems fused in adversity, then shamed into obscurity. Falling geese can-can across the ice, colliding with a snow bank. Best meter and theme don't suffice, that is why it is so rank.
Richard Carling
2024-01-29 23:50:22 +0000 UTCI would bet that Max's whimsical interests are shared with the author.
nero
2024-01-29 22:00:06 +0000 UTCAll caught up til Friday, thanks for the poem laughs
RiC
2024-01-29 20:42:15 +0000 UTCExactly! I'm in awe of the way Ted manages to write in all of these different themes all the time! I read a story about football and I feel that I'm learning about EVERYTHING! I'm becoming more sophisticated man, one chapter at the time.
Olof Falk
2024-01-29 19:56:40 +0000 UTCThe writing is absolutely superb. Henri as Max’s emotional bellwether is always a great time.
MAS
2024-01-29 19:05:35 +0000 UTCIt gives me a smile every week, when it's Monday and we get a new treat!
Joppest
2024-01-29 18:55:10 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, weird and wonderful. Also, I love this so much: Soft and fitful rain passes over the ridge; the light of the setting sun streams along the freehold to Stamford Bridge. Amazing :d
James Probert
2024-01-29 17:17:11 +0000 UTCThis comment section is full of wonderful feedback! You know what's approximately 44 times more full of equally wonderful feedback? The Player Manager discord, which has a thread with over 175 comments on just this chapter specifically, at the time of this comment. All that's missing is YOU.
Ham_Biscuits
2024-01-29 17:04:44 +0000 UTCThis was sweet. I love that Max is, in his clumsy and commitment-phobic way, really showing Emma how he feels about her. Great to see some slow personal drama in and around all of the footballing.
Kevin Flynn
2024-01-29 17:00:16 +0000 UTCCongratulations to this chapter. For me at least, it really worked.. in a wacky way, it's really, really, romantic. Awesome. Looking forward to more football :)
PrometheusII
2024-01-29 16:49:47 +0000 UTCThis may be my favorite chapter. Bravo, Ted!
Geoff Urland
2024-01-29 16:22:02 +0000 UTCThe length and quality of these chapters, week in week out, is baffling. On the subject of a different theme for each chapter, you're either the quickest researcher I've ever heard of, or the ultimate renaissance man
Felix Skinner
2024-01-29 15:58:07 +0000 UTC
