7.1 - The First Cut is the Deepest
Added 2023-12-15 11:57:47 +0000 UTC.
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Took me until the third reading to realize 450k/9k=50k
MarxBars
2024-12-06 05:47:23 +0000 UTC"And then Brooke was gone and out of my life forever." LOL. Funny.
Eidetic Eidolon
2023-12-18 19:50:49 +0000 UTCAhh sorry my bad! Carry on...
SciFi Fan
2023-12-16 12:21:04 +0000 UTCI’m guessing the dog. With a small chance of it being the kebab vendor
Brandon Baier
2023-12-16 11:28:37 +0000 UTCI don't think it was criticism. Just eagerness to see what happens next. BTW loved the chapter
Stoneykaroney
2023-12-16 01:21:02 +0000 UTCMother or Psychic dog?
Richard Carling
2023-12-16 01:19:10 +0000 UTCArgh! Does anyone else hate it when a chapter ends in the middle of a match?
Anon
2023-12-16 00:00:08 +0000 UTCAs a live Texan, can confirm "Dang" is used in a professional when trying not to comfortably curse - like at a job interview. Is real.
Jordan Buie
2023-12-15 21:12:54 +0000 UTCBrooke seems neat. Max might not see it, but he could really use a hard nosed business type to take on a million things at the club. Also, I forget, what's Goliath's heading? Lastly, dammit Ted, you're going to drag the Raffi mystery out for half the book, aren't you.
BelligerentGnu
2023-12-15 20:39:24 +0000 UTCI bet the Dog can only sense CA and not PA and at that point in time Max had some serious character flaws.
Geoff Urland
2023-12-15 18:46:58 +0000 UTCMax thinks so!
Ted Steel
2023-12-15 18:16:22 +0000 UTCBut was it really?
Galeg
2023-12-15 18:03:37 +0000 UTCThe dog was wrong!
Ted Steel
2023-12-15 18:01:14 +0000 UTCI'm not sure I understand the criticism. This is chapter one of a new book. The people who buy book 6 will have a 6-month gap before they read this chapter. I'm not sure what you want me to do differently.
Ted Steel
2023-12-15 18:00:48 +0000 UTC"And then Brooke was gone and out of my life forever." Uh huh.
MrHrulgin
2023-12-15 16:27:50 +0000 UTCI hope so
Leon Beverley
2023-12-15 15:03:13 +0000 UTCGood setup
Froyo Baggins
2023-12-15 14:54:33 +0000 UTCHe's gonna get a big picture of the dog on his wall, isn't he?
Galeg
2023-12-15 14:20:04 +0000 UTCGreat chapter- this is a good setup for what will likely be the themes of the book - getting Max support on the business side (and planning facilities upgrades), getting Max to process and come to peace with Raffi, and slapping the absolute s*** out of the National League North!
Geoff Urland
2023-12-15 14:13:47 +0000 UTCShe said Dang? Really?
Geoff Urland
2023-12-15 14:08:47 +0000 UTCI like the way you create the summary chapters. They're creatively informative, but for the last 4 months I've been refreshing patreon every Monday and Friday so that I can start my morning off right by following the Max Best journey and I don't need that summary.
Carlos Garcia
2023-12-15 13:39:08 +0000 UTCI know exactly who the picture is going to be!
Brandon Baier
2023-12-15 13:35:01 +0000 UTCGod damn! I love this story!
Josh Enterman
2023-12-15 13:34:57 +0000 UTCNo it's T3 for tier three - the Club Legend Patreon tier :)
Ted Steel
2023-12-15 13:04:26 +0000 UTCThank you for the Chapter! Small correction: 1 - The First Cut is the Deepest [T4] (should refer book 4 instead of 3)
SciFi Fan
2023-12-15 13:01:19 +0000 UTC
