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6.6 - Assists

Recap - Max went on a podcast to say he was pla

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Just reread this chapter. The scenes with Benny and the crowd brought a tear to my eye

Geoff Urland

I think it was more of a sarcastic joke. As in "Max Best just took over and started bullying everyone around...that's not like him at all..."

Eidetic Eidolon

"Wait," said Steve Alton. "He just made himself the manager from one second to the next? Bossing them around?". Does Alton... Suspect???

nero

I suppose he likes whatever he can make work for him. Maybe if Yaya hadn't been such an entitled prick, he'd have ended up playing two pivots back in 2010/11. Not that I'm complaining about that season.

Eltirno

Thanks! I'm happy you're happy!

Ted Steel

He likes it now, though, right?

Ted Steel

Great chapter!! It would be cool to get a pov of the Smasho or MD watching Benny come on and scoring or maybe MD or Smasho describing it to Max, and similarly of Spectrum doing the broadcast(the previous Broadcast pov was mint) . Cant wait for Mondays chapter.

Geoff R.

Stealing victory even in defeat - a surprise emotional beat at the end. Loved it!

Jordan Buie

"Director of High Performance seems like an optical sight for a rifle. " Or the name of a yearly and "prestigious" Adult Video Award.

Eidetic Eidolon

Nice one, Ted.

Matthew The Bread Smith

Benny has a tale to tell to toddlers at his family gatherings. Cambridge United have Kevin Betsy and Barry Corr as Assistant Managers. Director of High Performance seems like an optical sight for a rifle.

Richard Carling

Begging pardon, but Pep's Barca never had a double pivot. Oh, and thanks for the chapter, made my Friday.

Eltirno

Glorious chapter, cheers ted

James Probert

I don't know if I'm overly affected by the brief and entirely reasonable pause while you saw family (which nonetheless felt like a year-long hiatus) but everything about this chapter made me very happy. Cracking end to the week.

Felix Skinner


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